Dwhale Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 [align=center] I haven't made a card I really love in a while so this is a step up.. The Image I think is amazing! I hope you like him... Suggestions, Comment, All Appreciated Artist - El-KenishinI do not own the artwork to this card. I have only used it as a means to increase the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of it. ^_^ [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Its perfect. 9.8/10(Dont like the image...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Thanks but, I thought the Image was the best part xD... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Sorry, it looks dumb for me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
majicfrog Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Hm...shouldn't it be "ATK" and not "attack"?Also, the first part of the effect should be a bit more specific. There is nothing in the effect that says it cannot select itself as th monster that must stay on the field. When you say "destroyed", do you mean in battle or at all? Can you select any monster on the field? Only your opponent's? Only your's except "Arrogant Archer- Bartosz"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 pretty good, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Hm...shouldn't it be "ATK" and not "attack"?Also' date=' the first part of the effect should be a bit more specific. There is nothing in the effect that says it cannot select itself as th monster that must stay on the field. When you say "destroyed", do you mean in battle or at all? Can you select any monster on the field? Only your opponent's? Only your's except "Arrogant Archer- Bartosz"?[/quote'] Um.. 1st of all it's always attack you never put ATK... I think.. and what makes you think you can select yourself? I guess I could say on your opponents die of the field... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
majicfrog Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Hm...shouldn't it be "ATK" and not "attack"?Also' date=' the first part of the effect should be a bit more specific. There is nothing in the effect that says it cannot select itself as th monster that must stay on the field. When you say "destroyed", do you mean in battle or at all? Can you select any monster on the field? Only your opponent's? Only your's except "Arrogant Archer- Bartosz"?[/quote'] Um.. 1st of all it's always attack you never put ATK... I think.. and what makes you think you can select yourself? I guess I could say on your opponents die of the field...What I'm saying is the effect should look something like this (and if you're talking about points, which in this case you are in the description, it is ALWAYS "ATK". When you are talking about a monster attacking another, I believe you use "attack".Here what I think it should look like in the effect (take out "*"s): When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, select 1 face-up monster on the field, excluding "Arrogant Archer Bartosz"*. As long as this selected monster is face-up on the field, this card cannot be destroyed in battle.** Increase the ATK of this card by 100 points every time this monster destroys a face-down Defense Position monster in battle. *So it can't select itself, and so two "Arrogant Archer Bartosz"s can't select each other.** Magic and Trap cards would still be able to destroy it, though you could take the "In battle" part out if you wanted. Just a suggestion. I think that's how it should look...as a side note, you used the word "It's" meaning "It is" when you should have used the word "its" meaning belonging to something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 The picture is kinda weird I believe its ATK, not attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 It is 'ATK' not 'attack', you should know that. -_-Still the card is not bad, image could be better tho. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 i don't understand why everyone is repeting the same stuff ,i think he got it the first time ,anyway ,cool image ,great effect (pretty balanced) ,and i thinks face-down should be *Face-down* ,8.56/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Very Good!! 10/10I actually Like the picture! Unique! :D^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks for the comments everyone.. I truly appreciate it. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Dark Spine Sonic, no! its face-down not Face-down. *now face palm for you* Im new and these guys who think they know ocg are not in fact what they claim to be. People cant back their claims up so ignore them right! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Thanks Faded..... I didn't feel like arguing so I didn't say it but... Face Down defanitly shouldn't be capitalized.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Perfect Card! I like it ^__^! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 ATK not attack.IT MUST BE WRITTEN AS ATK.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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