Demise Cards :D

[GmNitro]

hey guys first time posting here hope you like my work!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so what do u guys think for my first attempt? I will add some synchro monsters but yeah , i guess you get the point. Feel free to express yourselfes

[wightpower]

Cool images. I should probably start by telling you that you should move these to the "Realistic Cards - Multiple Cards" section. That's where you put multiple cards, sets, and archetypes. This section is just for individual cards. Second, while "demise" is a very cool word, you may want to change it if you don't want "Demise, King of Armageddon", "Earl of Demise", and "Malice Doll of Demise" cramping your style (which shouldn't be possible, because all three are very stylish). Finally, I'd appreciate it if you added text versions of their effects underneath each card. These old eyes of mine don't see like they used to.

 

As for the cards themselves, I think you can adjust some of the levels for their stats. Akeldama can probably be beefed up to three stars and Onyx and Alvah can probably be brought down to one star each, given their base stats. You should probably change Akeldama's effect to "...on the field, you can Special Summon this card from your hand..." that way you can choose not to summon it if you don't want to. I'm seeing a lot of OCG problems, but it'll be a lot easier for me to suggest fixes if you have their effects in text. I'll be here all day typing up grammar fixes if I have to keep scrolling up to the cards.

 

Anyway, for a general quick review, I feel like their effects are all over the place, which isn't really a bad thing. I know the lower-level cards have some good searching and special summoning effects, but I feel like you can edit some of their effects to give them a more cohesive strategy. It also wouldn't be a bad idea to add a stronger monster that isn't a Synchro, so you have a powerhouse to fall back on just in case.

[GmNitro]

hey , fist of all i would like to thank you for giving me some time. As for the lvls of the cards i made them to help me up with the Synchro card lvls i'll make. Sure they do need some adjust but dont forget its my first time atempting something like that. I will also edit this post to add the new cards i'll make and i will also have a text with their effects.

 

btw i got no idea how i can move this post if someone tells me how , i will :)