Scrap Metal Reaper

[Zazubat]

Obviously a support card for Gimmick Puppets, additionally, it's another Scrap card. So that's something.

 

You can only control 1 “Scrap Metal Reaper”. If you control no monsters, and the only monsters in your Graveyard are Machine-Type monsters: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. When you do: You can target 1 of your banished Machine-Type monsters; return it to the Graveyard, then change this card to Defense Position. An Xyz Monster that was Summoned using this card as an Xyz Material gains this effect while this card is attached to it as an Xyz Material.
    If a monster(s) with the same Archetype as this card would be destroyed by battle or by your opponnet’s card effect, you can discard 1 card instead.

 

 

NOTE: Archetype means any card in the game where a card has the Archetype name in quotes. For cards like Gimmick Puppets, see cards like "Junk Puppet".

[BoricuaBeast]

Nice effect. Liking the pic on it too. This thing looks like it would be fun to use in Gimmick Puppets, Machinas, and with Gadjiltron dragon.
Though, i think the last effect that adds an additional effect to the XYZ monster should be a detach thing, but that's just me...

[Zazubat]

Nice effect. Liking the pic on it too. This thing looks like it would be fun to use in Gimmick Puppets, Machinas, and with Gadjiltron dragon.
Though, i think the last effect that adds an additional effect to the XYZ monster should be a detach thing, but that's just me...

To review, you must give reasons why you would think that it would need it to be detached, rather than just saying that it "should be" something. It doesn't really help me out at all, and while I am glad you like it, I cannot really improve apon my card unless I am given a constructive review. Also, please read the rules regarding the Advanced Clause:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum-9/announcement-53-new-custom-cards-section-rules/

[bbbgenius]

This card would be a great addition to any Scrap Metal or Machine-based deck because of it's effect. I like how you can special summon it to the field when you have no monsters (kinda like Cyber Dragon), but only 2100 attack with no defense is somewhat harsh. I wouldn't up the attack at all, but give him at least 1000 defense so he won't be taken down easily in defense mode. Second of all, I like how you can use his effect as an Xyz material, but replace "same Archtype" with "Scrap Metal" (which I assume you were going for). Archetype isn't used on actual yugioh cards because it causes confusion as to what the archetype really is. Besides that I would make him a level 6 (unless there is a powerful Xyz monster that is rank 8 out there), and keep it at that.

 

Score: 9/10

 

Make revisions: 10/10

 

Give me a rep too please, Thank you!

[BoricuaBeast]

[quote name="Zazubat" post="6252026" timestamp="1375805026"]To review, you must give reasons why you would think that it would need it to be detached, rather than just saying that it "should be" something. It doesn't really help me out at all, and while I am glad you like it, I cannot really improve apon my card unless I am given a constructive review. Also, please read the rules regarding the Advanced Clause:[url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum-9/announcement-53-new-custom-cards-section-rules/]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum-9/announcement-53-new-custom-cards-section-rules/[/url][/quote]Oh, my bad. What I meant when I said it should be a "detach" thing was instead of discarding a card from your hand for protection, the XYZ monster that used this monster as a material could detach one of it's materials instead, kinda like Battlin' Boxer Lead Yoke. My reason for that is I could see some shenanigans with Zombiestein and Gimmick puppet of leo.

[Zazubat]

This card would be a great addition to any Scrap Metal or Machine-based deck because of it's effect. I like how you can special summon it to the field when you have no monsters (kinda like Cyber Dragon), but only 2100 attack with no defense is somewhat harsh. I wouldn't up the attack at all, but give him at least 1000 defense so he won't be taken down easily in defense mode. Second of all, I like how you can use his effect as an Xyz material, but replace "same Archtype" with "Scrap Metal" (which I assume you were going for). Archetype isn't used on actual yugioh cards because it causes confusion as to what the archetype really is. Besides that I would make him a level 6 (unless there is a powerful Xyz monster that is rank 8 out there), and keep it at that.

 

Score: 9/10

 

Make revisions: 10/10

 

Give me a rep too please, Thank you!

Scrap Metal isn't an Archetype, nor is there any other monster named Scrap Metal in the game (let alone an Xyz Monster). Also, 0 DEF is so cards like Recurring Nightmare can make it come back. Why on earth would I want to change the DEF? When you Summon it, you are suppose to go into an Xyz Monster right away, the change to DP part is only so your opponent can run over it if you fail to use it (it is an easy Summon with a lot of support). Lastly, have you even looked at Gimmick Puppets? I hardly doubt that considering that you wish for it to support Rank 6s instead. Gimmick Puppets are Level 8 and Rank 8, nothing else about that. The discard is even made to support them, since they want to be in the Graveyard most of the time.

[Morgan LeFlay]

Here's why you can't really use the term "Archtype" on a realistic card.

 

Suppose it had its level reduced by 1 and was attached to "Mecha Phantom Beast Dracossack" Obviously "Mecha Phantom Beast" is an archtype, it's mentioned by name in several of the "Mecha Phantom Beast" cards. What about the regular Phantom Beasts? That's an archtype too, but you wouldn't know it if the monster you had on the field was Phantom Beast Wild-Horn, which doesn't mention the "Archtype" by name.

 

Is "Mecha" an archtype? There are several "Mecha" cards that aren't "Phantom Beasts". If you're using this in a duel, are you supposed to know what is an archetype and what isn't? Does it have to be an archtype specifically named in some card's effect?

What if I decide "a" is an archetype and want to protect any monster with "a" in its name? Etc.

[Zazubat]

Here's why you can't really use the term "Archtype" on a realistic card.

 

Suppose it had its level reduced by 1 and was attached to "Mecha Phantom Beast Dracossack" Obviously "Mecha Phantom Beast" is an archtype, it's mentioned by name in several of the "Mecha Phantom Beast" cards. What about the regular Phantom Beasts? That's an archtype too, but you wouldn't know it if the monster you had on the field was Phantom Beast Wild-Horn, which doesn't mention the "Archtype" by name.

 

Is "Mecha" an archtype? There are several "Mecha" cards that aren't "Phantom Beasts". If you're using this in a duel, are you supposed to know what is an archetype and what isn't? Does it have to be an archtype specifically named in some card's effect?

What if I decide "a" is an archetype and want to protect any monster with "a" in its name? Etc.

I can use Archetype as I wish, though it is true that it isn't on any card. My description of Archetype is a card that has the quotes and the Archetype name in one of their cards. Since it is somewhat of a new thing, I will add that to the OT

[patient99]

You do know there is a scrap archtype right? that one with all the monsters that destroy themselves and gain bonuses from doing so?

[darrenlkh]

how did you make the card so big? the resolution looks good.