first card in a while

[TX James]

 

Lore: 

Each time you gain life points, your opponent looses life points equal to the amount you gained. You can send 2 fairy type monsters from your side of the field to the graveyard to special summon this card from your graveyard in face up attack position

[DisturbedNeo]

Level 8 LIGHT Fairy-Type monster with 2800 ATK. Pretty standard stats right there. Image is good, looks like a real card and it matches the Attribute, type and ATK quite nicely.

 

It appears to have "UNAS" for its pack, but no number. Should ideally have "ENXXX", where XXX is a number. Even 001 would be fine.

 

There are errors in the lore, but if this is your first card in a while, there's bound to be at least a couple.

 

So correct OCG would look like:

"Each time you gain Life Points: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the amount of Life Points you gained. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can send 2 Fairy-Type monsters from your side of the field to the Graveyard; Special Summon this card from your Graveyard."

 

Not sure about the name. Aurora (If that's what it is) is misspelled and Auroralos doesn't make sense as a word to me.

 

This would work as a nice addition to some Fairy Decks. Especially brutal combined with The Fountain in the Sky.

 

Overall I give this a 7/10. Loses 2 points for the OCG errors in the lore, 1/2 a point for the lack of card number and 1/2 a point for the name.

 

Sorry if I seem harsh, but to be perfectly honest, there's not a whole lot to criticise, so I'm being extra picky about stuff XD