2 Random Cards I need Feed Back On

[Harrison H]

These 2 cards I made for a contest but the judge never Judge it, Would someone like to give a review?

[spoiler='Evil Dark Dragon'][spoiler='Effect']Red Eyes B. Dragon + Red Eyes B. Dragon
When this card is summoned target 1 monster your opponent controls and the target loses 1000 ATK and DEF. Once per a turn tribute 1 monster you control to target 1 monster controls; the target loses 500 ATK and is change to Attack position. When this card attack a Defence position monster flip it face up into attack position, If it has a flip effect it is not activated. [/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler='Sea Serpent Dragon'][spoiler='Effect']This card can only be flip summoned. When this card is flip summoned return all WATER type monsters in your graveyard to your deck and banish all Fire type monsters in your graveyard. This card can not be destroyed if "Umi" is on the field. This card can be destroyed by a Fire type monster.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[BoricuaBeast]

Ok, here's my opinions: the red-eyes fusion is ok, yet there's major OCG (Official Card Grammar) errors. Here's a retext:
"When this card is Fusion Summoned, you can target 1 monster your opponent controls, that target loses 1000 ATK & DEF. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster you control: target 1 face-up defense position monster your opponent controls, that target is changed to face-up attack position and it loses 500 ATK."
It's best to have that last part removed, since it will just be another Evil HERO Dark Gaia. I would give this like a 7/10 at most.

For the second monster, it's horribly underpowered, and again, Major OCG errors. Here's some suggested changes:
Level: 6
ATK/DEF: 2400/1000
Lore: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned. When this card is flipped face-up, you can return up to 5 WATER monsters from your graveyard back to the deck, and if your opponent controls any FIRE monsters, decrease the ATK of those monster(s) by 200 for each card returned to the deck by this effect. If you control a face-up "Umi", this card cannot be targeted for effects or selected as an attack target. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a FIRE monster."
I kinda had to nerf the stats a bit. Nobody would want to play a monster that's level 8 and can only be set. It would be useless like that. On top of that, it's VERY uncanny to see people run fire monsters in a water deck, unless they were using Frost and Flame Dragon, so i removed that banishing section of the effect, and changed it to anti-fire tactics. Lastly, having a monster you cant kill all because of a little field spell is kinda unfair. Ultimately, having it this way would make it more playable due to a better effect and easier to summon.
4/10 for that one, sorry.

[Harrison H]

Thank you the Changes have been made

[Harrison H]

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