Random Cards - Space Cloud

[Megagun133]

http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Space%20Cloud&cardtype=Spell&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=3&magictraptype=Continuous&rarity=Ultimate%20Rare&picture=http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/rustyphil/rustyphil1104/rustyphil110400048/9420824-tiefe-weltraum-gas-cloud-nebel-galaxy-und-sterne.jpg&set1=2515&set2=8758&inset=false&type=Warrior&description=You%20can%20pay%201000%20Lifepoints%20when%20a%20monster%20on%20your%20field%20is%20destroyed%2C%20if%20it%20is%20destroyed%20by%20battle%2C%20the%20attacking%20card%20loses%20300%20ATK.%20In%20the%20next%20endphase%2C%20summon%20the%20destroyed%20card%20as%20special%20summon%20in%20selected%20position%2C%20its%20effects%20are%20negated.&circulation=1ST%20Edition&atk=1350&def=100&creator=Megagun133&year=2013&serial=36710468

 

Space Cloud

Spell Card/ Continous

 

You can pay 1000 Lifepoints when a monster on your field is destroyed, if it is destroyed by battle,

the attacking card loses 300 ATK. In the next endphase, summon the destroyed card as special

summon in selected position, its effects are negated.

 

I like making independent cards that everyone can use if they like the card.

[GiloniC]

Hmm, dunno. I'll try to make a appraisal system

 

 

Picture: 7/10

Well, it does look pretty nice, not overwhelming, but nice. :)

 

OCG: 8/10

Fine, only some mistakes are made (End Phase should be written in capital letters and not together + some other small things like that).

It should be: 

You can pay 1000 Life Points when a monster on your field is destroyed. If it is destroyed by battle,

the attacking card loses 300 ATK. Special Summon the destroyed monster during the next End Phase, its effects are negated.

 

Balance: 4/10

Seems a bit overpowered to me. You can just recycle any monster that got destroyed by card effects or battle and XYZ or Synchro it into another monster. It is not a "omgwtfbbqop"-card, but nevertheless too strong. ;)

The other effect can be handy, nothing wrong with that imo.

Playability: 9/10

A pretty meta-fitting card, so I think many people would use it.

 

Creativity: 7/10

I think the idea behind this card is meant well and yeah, I like it.

Overall: 7/10

[Megagun133]

@Balance What would you suggest me to do to make it more balanced? Higher the lifepoints cost?

[Infinitexyz]

You can pay 1000 Lifepoints when a monster on your field is destroyed, if it is destroyed by battle,

the attacking card loses 300 ATK. In the next endphase, summon the destroyed card as special

summon in selected position, its effects are negated.

 

Picture: 8

Card's effect: 74

Card's balance: 83

Atk & Def: XX

View: 10

*OVERALL: 7.6/10*

 

Suggested effect:

When an opponent’s monster destroys a monster you control; the attacking monster loses 300 ATK. During your next Standby Phase: You can pay 1000 Life Points; Special Summon that monster from your Graveyard.

[Enma Ai]

Very interesting card. It would definitally see play if it was real.  Being a Continuous spell leaves it vulnerable, and the high cost balances it out. Although I think if you make it Special Summon durring YOUR next End Phase then it would remove a bunch of broken plays. As it is right now, you could go into easy high cost Xyz monsters like Shock Master.

 

Suggested effect, with fixes:

 

When a monster you control is destroyed by battle: You can pay 1000 Life Points; all monsters your opponent controls lose 200 ATK. During your next End Phase; You can Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard that was destroyed by battle this turn. You can only use this effect of "Space Cloud" once per turn.

[magemeek22]

My revised effect:

 

When a monster you control is destroyed by battle, all monsters your opponent controls lose 200 ATK. During your next End Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points; Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard that was destroyed by battle this turn. You can only use this effect of "Space Cloud" once per turn.

(This is basically a revision of Dark Rose's revision. I just moved the cost to directly be contingent with the Special Summon and made the 200 ATK point decrease spammable)

 

It would work well in an ATK-based decks. However, with the revisions Dark Rose and I made (Dark Rose gets more credit than I do anyways), I'm not sure if negating the monster's effects is necessary anymore. In the revised effect, the monster's effects are NOT negated, but this works since it is Special Summoned during the End Phase (when you can't really do much). I liked the original idea, and I feel this rework only serves to make the card more playable. Other than that, I'm sure it would be playable in the present meta in a variety of ways. It especially would help slow decks gain some speed, and I think overall, its a good card that serves a plethora of plays. Perhaps I'm seeing things from a limited scope, but for now, that's all I have to say.

[Megagun133]

Well every deck and card are countered somehow and Space Cloud's effect can help some decks out pretty good.

Now how should i change the effect to make it more balanced?

I got 3 suggestions yet but i dont know which one to take :S