GalaxySun Posted August 20, 2013 Report Share Posted August 20, 2013 These are some of the cards i am working on inspired by photons/galaxy. What do you think? What could be improved? [attachment=38790:createcard.phpA.jpg] [attachment=38791:createcard.phpB.jpg] [attachment=38792:createcard.phpC.jpg] [attachment=38793:createcard.phpD.jpg] [attachment=38794:createcard.phpH.jpg] [attachment=38795:createcard.phpT.jpg] [attachment=38796:createcard.phpE.jpg] [attachment=38797:createcard.phpG.jpg] Sorry for some of the mistakes that i now just relised like the solar mage, the counter attack. So please don't pont out some of the grammer errors. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthakin Posted August 20, 2013 Report Share Posted August 20, 2013 They look, alright. it's too easy to see the Photon versions in them, so I think you should let your own creativity speak rather than making an already used deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted August 20, 2013 Report Share Posted August 20, 2013 I cannot read the lores (effects) of the cards, so I cannot have a clearly opinion about the OCG (Official Card Grammar). I can see that your pictures are overused and some have letters in them. By the Levels, I can say that the ATK and the DEF are ok... but I cannot be sure if I don't read the effects!You can also use spoilers in order to shrink your post![spoiler=a title]your image or images[/spoiler]To do that, just edit your 1st post.Over all,5/10 (for now) post the lores so I can see them and I change my judgement according to the effects ect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshyago17 Posted August 21, 2013 Report Share Posted August 21, 2013 i have 3 problems 1 ocg 2 power(most would probably be banned) 3 u need to specify the tokens(type,atribute,level,atk def) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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