Rate my first card please?

[Sw@gfag]

So.. I'm quite new to Yu-Gi-Oh and I discovered this site, I also got told about this site http://yugico.com/yugioh-card-creator.

I just created my first card on it, I do know abit of stuff about D.D's and other card's.

Any help would be quite handy thank you :) ..

 

 

Effect: Once per turn during your main phase; Special summon one level 4 or lower monster from your removed from play zone( The selected card cannot be used as a tribute for a synchro or Xyz summon), the selected monster is removed from play at the end phase of the turn it was special summoned by this effect.

 

I will understand if the effect isn't the best but if you could help me out with that, that would be great :)

 

Thanks.

[Enma Ai]

Heres an effect fix;

Once per turn during your Main Phase: You can target one of your Banished level 4 or lower monsters; Special Summon it. During your End Phase; Banish all monsters that were Special Summoned this way. Monsters that are Special Summoned by this cards effect can not be used as Synchro or Xyz materials.

 

It's a decent card, It probably wouldnt see a whole lot of play, since you can't do much with the monsters and it requires 2 Tributes to summon, unless you have a way to Special Summon it. Yes, it can help get you some monsters with good effects that are banished, but I don't think it's worth summoning this monster for.

 

Suggestions;

- up the DEF to ≥2800

- I would have the monster effects be negated when special summoned by this monsters effect, however, they will be allowed to be used as Xyz materials.

[Sw@gfag]

Okay :), I'll fix up the card and don't worry about all the other stuff, I'm making a set and i'll add some cards that help summon it.