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TheCardz

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Well, it's creative, I'll give you that. But, you need some changes.

 

A monster can only technically have one type, so it needs to be either Spellcaster or Beast. In this case, I'd make it a Beast, as it most resembles that by the picture (which is, by the way, quite interesting and cool, I'll give it that).

 

Secondly, I'll fix the OCG for you:

 

When this card is summoned, select one card on the field; negate its effect and destroy it.

 

Personally, I don't think you need the "negate its effect" part; it really isn't that necessary. However, just for one card, this card is not really worth summoning. Bump its ATK to something like 2500. That should balance it.

 

Other than that, it's all good. Currently, it's 6/10, change what I point it out and I'd give it a 7/10. However, overall, good job. Remember to keep on making cards!

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