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wilson_2010

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Well, let's take Crusader Defender for example - 7000 Life Points is a ridiculous cost to summon it, and though it appears to be a combo with Finishing Claw, it's situational and solely created for the sole purpose of an OTK, which is heavily frowned upon when creating cards.

 

The two Malefic monsters lack the required Malefic effects and conditions, and furthermore, Malefic Dark Magician doesn't exist (when you make a card that mentions another card in its effect - Malefic Dark Magician Girl in this case, you have to post the card mentioned as well). Also, you did not include stats and such for the tokens summoned by Malefic Dark Magician Girl (ATK, DEF, Attribute, Type, Level, etc.)

 

Also, Battalion Knight is Divine-Beast monster, which is prohibited in Realistic Cards. Furthermore, its effect is pretty much a direct reference to Slifer.

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