Custom New Orders

[Premier Alexander Romanov]

A good friend of mine is working on a ZEXAL fanfic, and for one of the Astralians, he wanted me to make some cards for her. She's a pyrokinetic zealot of order who has quite the anger issues and utilizes Hazy Flames, so with the reveal of how the New Orders work, here are her New Order cards.

New Orders 6 Aetonic Antianara
FIRE/Warrior/Xyz/Rank 6/2200 ATK/1300 DEF
2 Level 6 monsters
During either player's turn, when a monster is Special Summoned: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK or DEF of the Special Summoned monster, whichever is lower. At the start of the Damage Step, if this card with Xyz Material battles an Xyz Monster: Destroy that monster immediately (without damage calculation).

 

New Orders 7 Aetonic Penthesilea
FIRE/Warrior/Xyz/Rank 7/2600 ATK/1400 DEF
2 Level 7 monsters
Once per turn, if this card has Xyz Material; You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the target's Level x 200, or its Rank x 300. During either player's turn, when a card or effect is activated that targets this face-up card: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; negate the activation, and if you do, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent.

 

New Orders 8 Aetonic Hippolyta
FIRE/Warrior/Xyz/Rank 8/3000 ATK/1500 DEF
2 Level 8 monsters

You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 1 face-up Special Summoned monster your opponent controls; destroy it, and if you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's original ATK or DEF, whichever is lower, then, if the destroyed monster was an Xyz Monster, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each Xyz Material that was attached to the destroyed Xyz Monster.

 

Discuss, and feel free to correct any OCG errors.

Also, should these have Xyz Material restrictions regarding summoning, such as only FIRE monsters?

[AsmodeusCain]

Can I get the link to the fanfic? It seems interesting. But about the cards themselves... Well, let's see. About the FIRE thing, if the Astralian plays a Hazy Flame deck, it would seem kinda pointless seeing as all the monsters in her deck are FIRE Attribute anyway, but if it were to be played in a IRL deck, then yeah, that seems like a good idea. About Hippolyta, I think you should change the effect damage to "whichever is higher", because at this point you've Overlayed three times, so I think it's balanced enough. Other than that...well, Antiara's eff seems kinda like a Catastor for Xyz, which is pretty sweet. Possibly add an effect that reloads Xyz Materials, seeing as the effects of the monsters revolve around having them attached to the monster. Overall, I like it! Very cool, and works very well with Hazy Flame.