Grand Smith Tsuyo [XYZ Warrior/Equip Support]

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A quick XYZ I made when I had an idea.

 

 

2 Level 4 Warrior-Type monsters.

When this card is Xyz Summoned: All other Warrior-Type monsters gain 500 ATK as long as this card has an Xyz Material attached. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard to hand. This card gains 200 ATK for each face-up Equip Spell Card on the field. 

 

OCG Fixes are welcomed because I've never made an XYZ before and I am sure I made a mistake somewhere. Peace.

[Kingdom Xathers]

DAMN YOU! I wanted to use that image...  lol, jk about the damning, XD

 

 

Anyways, I'll start with the OCG Fix:

 

 

2 level 4 Warrior-Type monsters.

When this card is XYZ Summoned: All other Warrior-Type monsters gain 300 ATK until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can Detach 1 XYZ Material from this card; add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard to hand. This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up Equip Spell Card on the field.

 

 

 

Now, I don't really find a temporary ATK boost upon Summon to be the best thing in the world, especially since the boost is rather small.  Being able to gain ATK for every Equip Spell Card on the field is pretty decent, especially if you're playing Noble Knights, since their Noble Arms cards are pretty difficult to get rid of without wasting two destruction effects on each one.  Being able to get up to 2 Equips also helps out Noble Knights.

 

 

Seems decent, aside from the first effect.  I would rather make it apply the ATK boost to other Warriors if it still has at least 1 Xyz Material attached to it.

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DAMN YOU! I wanted to use that image...  lol, jk about the damning, XD

 

 

Anyways, I'll start with the OCG Fix:

 

 

2 level 4 Warrior-Type monsters.

When this card is XYZ Summoned: All other Warrior-Type monsters gain 300 ATK until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can Detach 1 XYZ Material from this card; add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard to hand. This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up Equip Spell Card on the field.

 

 

 

Now, I don't really find a temporary ATK boost upon Summon to be the best thing in the world, especially since the boost is rather small.  Being able to gain ATK for every Equip Spell Card on the field is pretty decent, especially if you're playing Noble Knights, since their Noble Arms cards are pretty difficult to get rid of without wasting two destruction effects on each one.  Being able to get up to 2 Equips also helps out Noble Knights.

 

 

Seems decent, aside from the first effect.  I would rather make it apply the ATK boost to other Warriors if it still has at least 1 Xyz Material attached to it.

 

So would the effect look something like:

 

2 level 4 Warrior-Type monsters.

When this card is XYZ Summoned: All other Warrior-Type monsters gain 500 ATK as long as this card has 1 XYZ Material attached. Once per turn: You can Detach 1 XYZ Material from this card; add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck or Graveyard to hand. This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up Equip Spell Card on the field.