New Egyptian God Card

[drschoi]

Hello this is my first post in this forum and this is my first card as it is. I based it on Egyptian Mythology and I created some drawbacks such as that if this card is destroyed by battle the controller of this card loses.

[Zextra]

Just want to point out that DIVINE-Attribute and Divine-Beast type cards are looked down upon and essentially prohibited in the Realistic Cards sub-forum, so this topic will be moved to Any Other Cards.

 

On another note, whenever you post a card(s), please be sure to post the card effect underneath so that others can read more easily; especially since your card text is currently too small for many people to bother with. Thanks.

[Project Leviamon]

If this card is destroyed by battle, this card's controller loses.

 

just... WHY? the card is really weak and useless and summoning "Chaos" monsters doesn't help as there are not many cards that people count as "Chaos" that actually have "Chaos" in their name

 

also like Zextra said, post the card effect below the card so other people would bother reading it

[NoshpalStefan]

Saying "when this dies, you lose" is not a restriction, it's just silly. Here, let me help you with the effect:

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned from your hand when a divine-beast-type monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. This card's summon and / or effects cannot be negated. When this card is special summoned successfully, you can pay 5000 Life Points; activate one of the following effects:

1) Send all cards on the field to the Graveyard;

2) Send all cards in both players's hands to the Graveyard;

3) Banish all cards in both players's Graveyards;

 

There, I made the effect grand and god-like, yet somewhat balanced as to not be OPed or UPed (or at least I hope I did, I might just be giving myself too much credit). But, in any case, anything regarding divine beasts is, indeed, not really supposed to be realistic, thus it's your choice. But, I'd rather just abandon the Chaos effect and replace the "can only be special summoned when divine beast is destroyed" effect and go with "when 'Obelisk the Tormentor', 'Slifer the Sky Dragon', or 'Winged Dragon of Ra" is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can special summon this card from hand". That's what I'd honestly go with instead to make it realistic. And I removed the being able to be ssed from everywhere effect because that is just silly. You finally got a god card out, the opponent barely managed to get past it - but guess what! I've got this stronger god that can come out of the deck and the grave! Isn't that wonderful?! Just... no.

 

Hope this helped.