The Corrputed Honor.

[Darthakin]

I made these cards for my fanfic, and figured I might as well post them here...

they are the typical "Opponent has way too strong" tatatitatata. 

 

Stayu:

This card can only be summoned with the effect of "Corruption of Honor" and by removing from play 2 monsters that include "Stardust Dragon" in their names, from you hand, deck, graveyard or extra deck. (This still counts as Synchro Summoning)

Once per turn, if a card would destroy this card, negate that card's effect and destroy it, then draw one card.  

Rexia: 

This card can only be summoned with "corruption of Honor" and be removing from play one "Serpent Night Dragon" And one "Red-eyes Black Dragon" from your hand, deck, extra deck, graveyard or field.  If you Draw this card, shuffle it back into your deck, and draw one card. 

 

Kaibu, The Blue-eyes White Dragon:

This card can only be summoned with the effect of "Corruption of Honor" And by removing from play Two monsters that include "Blue-eyes" In their name from your hand, Deck, Extra deck, Grevayard or field.

If you draw this card, shuffle it back in your deck, and add one "Corruption of Honor" to your hand. 

Corruption of Honor:

(it's readable)

[Syncopation]

The spell card won't work in real life. COA is a normal spell card. Normal Spells only stays on the field for one turn. Plus, the monster's summoning conditions should be on the spell card. Otherwise, the monsters are just pieces of cardbourd(impossible to summon). In fact, saying this, the monsters are better off as ritual monsters with a ritual spell card.
Also, Staryu is COMPLETELY impossible to summon since it is a Synchro Monster. Synchro monsters can't be summoned like a fusion monster, let alone summon itself.
Make the summoning conditions easier and simpler. Because no one is going to attempt to summon a monster that pretty much has no effect and hard to summon. And that is another thing, give them an effect that active on the feild or these cards won't see play.

Impossible to summon and all of them should be ritual monsters. And needs to have effects that makes them worth summoning.

4/10