Me first deck!

[karatewil]

Hi all!!!! this is the first time i post i hope its sincere review of my cards....

I use the angeloids of the Sora no Otoshimono!

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[Pyur]

A friend of mine did a set like this a while back, so I feel like I have to comment on these haha. I'll try and fix card grammar errors where I see them, but mine isn't perfect.

And for next time, I believe this would go in the Pop Culture section, since it's based off of an anime, although it isn't necessarily out of place here I don't think.

 

Anyway, 6* Ikaros. Basically a beefy Cyber Dragon. I've no problem with it, personally, but you could probably be a bit more creative with it.

 

5* Nymph. I think it's effect would be written like: Once per turn, you can target one spell or trap card in your Graveyard; Return that target to your hand. Don't quote me on it. Anywho, I like it, solid effect. Could be a tad broken, but I'm not aware of all the crazy things you can do with all the spells and traps that currently exist.

 

5* Astraea. Firstly, I have to give you props for spelling her name right. I believe the effect would just be: This card inflicts piercing battle damage. The second part looks right. Again, no quotes. 

 

4* Ikaros. 200 for every Fairy in your grave? That seems like a LOT of attack for a 4*. I'd say bump her up to 5 and keep her original attack at 1500, or leave her level as is and drop her attack a bit.

 

4* Nymph. Solid. Maybe a little more defense, but nothing really needs to be changed there.

 

First Ritual. Demise, King of Armageddon. Same stats and everything.

 

Second Ritual. Pretty good. Maybe drop the attack just a touch, 2800 or 2900, but nothing less, and doesn't HAVE to happen.

 

Still need that Ritual spell card. Aside from that, I like them overall. You did well for a first time.

[karatewil]

I really appreciate it, just put the monsters still not using this page so i will correct it cost to post but then put everything. Once again thanks  :D