yugiohmakermasta Posted October 11, 2013 Report Share Posted October 11, 2013 Not sure what I was thinking but here is a card that just came to my head and I decided to post it to see what you guys thought of it. Lore: during your opponent's Draw Phase, you can select 1 random card from your opponents hand if the card you selected is a light attribute monster with 1800 or more ATK points, return it to the top of the deck. The deck is then shuffled. all light attribute monsters you control gain an extra 500 ATK and DEF point. If a light attribute monster you control would be destroyed by a card effect you can discard 1 card to negate the effect and destroy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohmakermasta Posted October 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2013 Hope this card is okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted October 12, 2013 Report Share Posted October 12, 2013 The first effect is quite situational based on the Deck your Opponent is playing and more often then not will not be that useful. For The ATK gain I would switch to being all LIGHT Monsters so that could be a negative to you using this card as well. Lastly the protect ability, I would change this to instead of negating and destroying the card, just put it that you can Discard a Card instead of destroying the LIGHT Monster and I'd also make this for both players, so it's not insane for one side. Overall, I would change the card to be like this: "During your Standby Phase, if you do not control a LIGHT Monster, Destroy this card. During your Opponent's Draw Phase: you may Reveal 1 Card in your Opponent's Hand, then Discard 1 Card; If you Discarded the same kind of card as the Revealed card, negate that type of Card this turn. If your Opponent controls Monsters: All LIGHT Monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. If a LIGHT Monster would be Destroyed by a Card Effect: you may Discard 1 Card instead. OCG Grammer Fix: During your Opponent's Draw Phase, you may Target 1 Card in their Hand and Reveal it. If the target is a LIGHT Monster with 1800 or more ATK, Shuffle that card into the Owner's Deck. LIGHT Monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. If a LIGHT Monster you control would be destroyed by a Card Effect: You may Discard 1 Card, negate that effect and if you do, destroy that card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohmakermasta Posted October 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2013 I meant for this card to be like it is and I see it more like a side deck card now that I look at it. If there are any other suggestions from other people, please comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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