Dead Hero Ace

[Shafayat Chowdhury]

Forgive me if there is anything wrong with this.
I was thinking ther should be a Dead Hero archetype since there is Elemental Hero, Evil Hero etc.

So anyway this card may come from a new structure deck (Structure Deck Dead Hero???) and it should be the ace (main) monster of the deck?

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Ok, a couple of things:

For it to be realistic, it needs to be an actual type of monster, not Dead Hero. (You know, Zombie, Warrior, Etc.)

Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, and ATK should be capitalized.

Upto should be up to.

and it should be "discard up to 5 monsters from your hand to the graveyard"

I think I much larger ATK boost is needed, like from 100 to 300. If this to be an archetype, it needs the ace to support them. So, have the Dead HEROs work when discarded, put into the grave by another Dead HERO, etc.

Hope this helps!

[Zextra]

The card uses an unrealistic type, so unless you change it, this topic would belong in Any Other Cards, not here.

[Shafayat Chowdhury]

Sorry my bad.
Thanks for the tip, I have changed it however I have changed it to 200 atk rather than 300 because I think 300 will be overpowered

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Summoned should be capitalized. But yeah, 200 could be fine.

[Shafayat Chowdhury]

Ok, I updated it thanks, anything else needed to improve?