Baragan Posted October 25, 2013 Report Share Posted October 25, 2013 2 Level 7 monsters Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material: Target 1 Level 7 monster in your graveyard; banisht it and 1 card on your opponent's side. If this card has no Xyz Material; this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoricuaBeast Posted October 27, 2013 Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 Umm, Dragon ruler abuse much? The banishing effect is ok, but you gotta rethink what decks can abuse this. I have a few suggestions: • Make it so that it has to be 2 level 7 Spellcasters, and not a staple. • You could put it so that it can't be destroyed by card effects once per turn while it has material. • Make it so it can't attack after using its effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted October 27, 2013 Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 I agree with Beast. But I do love the pic. Asuna is cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack of the Lantern Posted October 27, 2013 Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 Fix: 2 Level 7 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material to target 1 Level 7 monster in your Graveyard; banish it and 1 card your opponent controls. If this card has no Xyz Material, it cannot be destroyed by card effects. Explanation for these changes I made: Effects go in the format Condition : Costs ; Effect. or Condition : Effect. or Cost ; Effect. Your colon was in the middle of the cost for some reason. -Graveyard is capitalized at all times. -"banish" simply has an extra letter that shouldn't be there and I just wanted you to know. -You can say "your opponent controls" or "on your opponent's side of the field". Both work, but if you'll go for the second one, complete it. -The last effect should have no colon or semi-colon, because it doesn't activate. It's a continuous effect. It's a situation that will be relevant for as long as the condition is met, and will stop being used the instant the condition changes. It also doesn't start chains. Much like the protection effect of "Maestroke". Ok I'm done with OCG. I like the concept, and I don't really know if it's overpowered or not, but I'm not sure Rank 7 is a good idea. More Dragon Ruler support. This one especially sounds as if it had been made just for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted October 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 2 Level 7 Spellcaster-type monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material to target 1 Level 7 monster in your Graveyard; banish it and 1 card your opponent controls. If this card has Xyz Material, it cannot be destroyed by card effects. This card cannot attack if you used this effect this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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