-Noel- Posted October 30, 2013 Report Share Posted October 30, 2013 My first Xyz monster :) comments welcome 2 Level 5 LIGHT Machine-Type monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 1 of your banished LIGHT Machine-Type monster: If you control a monster with the same name as a target, you can select 1 card on the field; Special Summon the target, then destroy the selected card (if any) and draw 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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goddamnit names are a pain Posted October 31, 2013 Report Share Posted October 31, 2013 The bonus draw for Cyber Dragons on the field is the inly OP thing about this card. Seems legit, if Cybers weren't getting Nova soon. Monster should be Monsters. And the OCG needs some work. If you control a monster with the same name as a target; Special Summon the target. If you do: you can select 1 card on the field, then destroy the selected card (if any) and draw 1 card. My fix is not the best either, but it is not as confusing as the original. Saying "the target" when there are two targets is not a good thing. Like the card though, works with the minority of Cyber Dragon-esque cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted October 31, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2013 Thx you very much. I will edit it when I go home Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted October 31, 2013 Report Share Posted October 31, 2013 No problem. I love to review machines and the lot. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted October 31, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2013 The bonus draw for Cyber Dragons on the field is the inly OP thing about this card. Seems legit, if Cybers weren't getting Nova soon. Monster should be Monsters. And the OCG needs some work. If you control a monster with the same name as a target; Special Summon the target. If you do: you can select 1 card on the field, then destroy the selected card (if any) and draw 1 card. My fix is not the best either, but it is not as confusing as the original. Saying "the target" when there are two targets is not a good thing. Like the card though, works with the minority of Cyber Dragon-esque cards. Edited, but i think i will keep an OCG text because my monster effect is about to SS. example when i control no monster with same name of the banished one and i use his effect. I can still summon the banished monster but i didnt get the destroy and draw effect. if you have better text you can tell me to edit. Thx u very much :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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