Thanatos the Dark Elemental

[Netami09]

 

Basically, the purpose of this card is to make your opponent raise his attack to 4000, after that, you can destroy nearly every monster out there.

 

NOTE: I was not trying to make this card realistic.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

You know, this card would actually be pretty realistic if it wasn't a Rank 1. I'd adjust the rank a little, and it very well could be realistic.

Not OP in anyway past that. I mean, your opponent just makes your monster a beater for you. You have to take the risk of attacking. And Skill Drain makes this card moot. Attack goes back down to 0, etc. Not bad for your first card. I want to say Rank 6+, but NOT Rank 7.

Card even looks realistic, and the art isn't too shabby either. =3

[Netami09]

A more realistic version:

 

 

I raised the rank to 6 to make him more balanced.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Just to let you know, I have been informed that having a signature that long is not liked around here.

So, maybe you can use [spoiler=Member Card]*insert card here*[/spoiler] To make it look shorter. Put the Member card there.

 

Here's the basic text for it.

[spoiler=Member Card]*insert card here*[/spoiler 

Just add the last ] to complete it. Completing it makes the above. 

 

OCG fixes:

Your opponent cannot target monsters for attacks, except this one.

[Netami09]

This better?

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Yes, that looks fine. No need to repost actually, your signature is changed on all posts.

And the card looks fine too. Maybe more people might come and give feedback. I don't think it seems too OP, but others might.

[Netami09]

Added effect relating to Xyz materials:



Lore: 3 level 6 monsters
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. This card gains 1000 ATK when attacked. Unless this card has 4000 or more ATK: Your opponent cannot target monsters for attacks, except this one. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card: It gains 1000 DEF.

[death00]

very good card, tech master said the only problems w/ the card you fixed them, it's really great

[Netami09]

Thanks!