Future archetype

[Azure Wolf]

Here is a archetype based on getting out monsters during your opponent's turn and lowering their monsters attack or raising your own. These are the first 4 feedback on effects would be helpful

 

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[Arhionvar]

Generally, this archetype is pretty weak right now just because it focuses on Future Charge and all of the monsters are different types (i.e., Reptile, Warrior, and Dragon). I also don't think you need to make all of your monsters "Future" what is it, type? (Btw, that would make a two type monster and you can't do that) Because their name already includes Future I'm pretty sure you can just drop it as Future Charge can use their names as well. Also, their artworks are pretty stretched and low quality. Maybe find better artworks next time? I recommend JazinKay's bucket. (Google it)

 

[spoiler=Future Charge] You can only activate play this card during your opponent's Battle Phase. When a monster you control is targeted for an attack, attacked you can tribute that monster it to Special Summon a "Future" monster with the same type and level from your deck. [/spoiler]

Alright, this one is ok, but I hardly see use because the only way you could use it without being an inconvenience to you is using exactly the same Future monster as a tribute as the one from your deck. Although nice that it gives an effect and negates an attack, it is extremely situational any other way. 

 

[spoiler=Future Dragon] When this card is special summoned by the effect of "Future Charge" you can target 1 monster on the field; and it gains 300 ATK. and increase its attack by 300 [/spoiler]

This card is pretty bad. It's a petty 300 attack gain, and it's only 2000. Maybe buff its attack, or buff the buff?

 

[spoiler=Future Soldier] When this card is special summoned by the effect of "Future Charge" you can target 1 monster on the field; it loses 300 ATK. and decrease its defense by 300 [/spoiler]

Once again, a pretty bad card. Maybe buff its attack or buff the buff?

 

[spoiler=Future Serpent] When this card is special summoned by the effect of "Future Charge" you can target 1 monster on the field; it gains 300 ATK and loses 300 DEF. and increase its attack by 300 and decrease its attack by 300 [/spoiler]

This one is pretty strange. It's a buff for you, but also a debuff for you. and don't even think about giving your opponent ATTACK if they're ATTACKING you! I'm pretty sure this is the worst card in the set.

 

Overall, this is a pretty bad archetype. Unless you add more support, I think it would die to pretty much any meta deck (or non-meta deck, for that matter) as it is only 4 cards, and while 3 aren't good, the other brings out those 3.

 

Look: 2/10

Usability 1/10

Overall: 1.5/10 "This is not a great card/cards"

[Azure Wolf]

Edited the effects and the artwork for two of the cards but couldn't find artwork for the other 2.

 Also the effects only activate if you special summon them with future charge and are also optional. 

[Arhionvar]

Edited the effects and the artwork for two of the cards but couldn't find artwork for the other 2.

 Also the effects only activate if you special summon them with future charge and are also optional. 

I like the new artworks, and you should copy and paste the card lore from the card creator to make it easier to edit (for reviewers). I like the attack gain and defense loss buffs, but I still think the archetype is a little weak as the monsters don't have any connection to each other.

 

Artworks: 4/10 (The warrior and dragon don't really seem like they're connected)

Usability: 2/10

Overall: 3/10 "This is an alright card/cards"

[StarKnightJacobs]

It looks like you have something going, but serpent is underwhelming. Discarding a card does not sound nearly worth a level increase. Other than that, its pretty solid.