Dark Awakening

[Dark Strawberry]

My first attempt at making a card. Please review. =)

 

 

 

Once per turn: You can pay 1000 Life Points; Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower Normal Monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. It gains 500 ATK but cannot attack the turn it is Summoned. You cannot Normal Summon or Special Summon any other monsters the turn you activate this effect. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. During your End Phase: Discard 1 card, if you cannot, this card is banished.

[Amyar]

Nice Idea. I like the costs and it balances out nicely with the benefits making it not too over powered, just powerful enough to make it a valid option. 

a few things: 1) How about making the lv limit 7. A level 8 monster out of nowhere can really turn things around quickly and maybe unfairly ?

                     2) Tributing one monster per turn seems a BIT harsh. How about one card your control on the field (ie: also spells and traps).

                     3) Gaing 1000 ATK to a lv 8 card would give you around a lv 10 or higher type card on the field and battle ready instantly (or in one                            other turn). Maybe lower it to 500 or so. 

Since doing all these things would make, in my opinion, the card not worth the effort, you can choose what effects you want to implement. Or you can just ignore this post :) . Anyway, hope this helps, and i really like the idea. 

[Dark Strawberry]

Tributing one monster per turn seems a BIT harsh.

 

Thanks for reviewing. Level 7 sounds about right, I'll change it to that. What would you recommend for a cost instead of Tributing one monster per turn?

[Amyar]

Just fixed my post ^

[Dark Strawberry]

Just fixed my post ^

 

Thanks. I went with your recommendations but decided to make it a discard cost instead of a sending 1 card from the field cost. ^^