Fiend of Flora

[OKIJIN]

Thoughts? Felt like making an ace card for a plant based deck.

 

 

 

 

This card cannot be Special summoned. This card can only be Tribute summoned by sacrificing 2 level 4 Plant type monsters. When successfully tribute summoned you can search your deck for up to 3 level 4 or lower Plant type monsters and special summon them. Once per turn you can sacrifice 500 life points to special summon a Plant type monster from your graveyard. You can sacrifice a Plant type monster to increase your life points by 200 times the sacrificed monsters level or inflict direct damage to your opponents life points equal to half of the sacrificed monsters attack points.

[Dark Strawberry]

Awesome. Don't see anything wrong with it. Keep up the good work.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 2 level 4 Plant-type monsters. When successfully Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Plant-type from your deck. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to special summon a Plant-type monster from your graveyard. You can Tribute a Plant type monster to increase your Life Points by 200 times the Tributed monster's level or inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half of the Tributed monster's ATK.

 

I posted the edits in here. No Sacrificing, its pay or tribute. Summoned is capitalized. So is Tribute. - in between Plant and type.

Comma issues. Not "search deck" just simply do the action. 3 is just too much. Life Points Capitalized. ATK, not attack points.

Monster's and opponent's, apostrophes needed. 
Now on to the card. It is horribly overpowered by searching out even 1 plant, but you had it at 3. Lonefire Blossom, Spore, Dandylion, and some crazy combos. Special Summoning from the grave after that is just too much. The last effect is kind of useless, while kind of too strong as well. I'd narrow it down to one effect, maybe two, if you balance. Hope this helps.

[MrInpachi]

The original card lore

This card cannot be Special summoned. This card can only be Tribute summoned by sacrificing 2 level 4 Plant type monsters. When successfully tribute summoned you can search your deck for up to 3 level 4 or lower Plant type monsters and special summon them. Once per turn you can sacrifice 500 life points to special summon a Plant type monster from your graveyard. You can sacrifice a Plant type monster to increase your life points by 200 times the sacrificed monsters level or inflict direct damage to your opponents life points equal to half of the sacrificed monsters attack points.

How the effect should be written

Cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing 2 Level 4 Plant-Type monsters. When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon 3 Level 4 or lower Plant-Type monsters from your Deck. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life points: Special Summon 1 Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard. You can tribute 1 Plant-Type monster you control, activate one of these effects:
- Gain Life points equal to the Level of the monster x 200.
- Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of the monster tributed.

Also, these effects are ridiculously broken in my opinion. Is there anyway that the effects could be.. "less broken" ?

[-Noel-]

I suggest that u should change the summoning effect to summon only 1 plant or add 2 to your hand, that's more acceptable even the last one I said is a bit OP, but it's not broken