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New User - New Cards (Card Collection 8/100) Last Update: 04.05.2008


Bluedragon

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The 1st 2 and the last one look cool. the others not so much

 

^Agree. The OCG could use some work, but is a fairly good start. The black and white pics should be changed/colored if possible to make them look more realistic. Other than that, pretty good cards, especially for a new member.

 

overall - 11.44/13.69 ^_^

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Seeing as your new you may not be familiar with the Term OCG, which means Official Card Grammar.

 

There are many OCG errors within these cards and seeing as you seem to be a pleased card maker i believe its best to tell you your errors as i believe you would want perfect cards.

 

I shall correct the errors in the first card to show you how common errors are, and it should help you with further card making.

 

 

Card 1

 

Card 1 should say;

 

This card can be Special Summoned by removing 3 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. While this card remains face-up on your field, increase the ATK of all Fiend-Type monsters on the field by 800.

 

Certain words like Graveyard and Type and Special Summoned all start with a Cap letter, some words like 'field' dont, you must be careful which words you cap. Thats called Grammar.

 

OCG errors are wording errors, like you didnt word it as i have done.

 

Also, as a site rule, of which you hopefully should of read before posting, you must credit the artists of the images you used, if not please add a disclaimer. Rules should be read before posting.

 

Need any help PM me ^_^

 

But these are good for your first ^_^

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