Hikari-chan Posted November 27, 2013 Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 So i finally finished the ace monster of my previously "Moon" monsters (here and here) all CnC are welcome and next time maybe you'll see this in Multiple Cards section ^ ^ Lore: 2 Level 4 "Moon" monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned; gain 400 Life Points for each face-down card on the field. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 monster on the field; change the target to face-down Defense Position. P.S. Tsukiari's name is from Tsuki (Moon) + Akari (Light) ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Strawberry Posted November 27, 2013 Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 2 notes, you've forgotten to note down that it's an effect monster. Currently on the card it says Dragon/Xyz but it should say Dragon/Xyz/Effect. Also, while your lore is almost perfect, you made a small error: "You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 monster on the field; change the target to face-down Defense Position." Other than that, this card is great and works well with your other cards. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 fixed it, thx ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 27, 2013 Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 hmm nice card, a recovery effect after pay some LP for those 2 moon monsters also a set effect w/o any cost other than ORU seems acceptable if it's Xyz monster that's need specific materials, also i like it design, its name and pic are very appropriate each other, love it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 thx u very much :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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