[TGP] Tour Shuttle - Fiend Support

[TGPhoenix]

 

 

Tour Shuttle to the Netherworld
Rank 3 | DARK | Fiend

2 level 3 Fiend-Type monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material to add 1 level 3 or lower Fiend-Type monster from your deck to your hand; monsters with that name cannot be Summoned this turn. You can only control 1 face-up "Tour Shuttle to the Netherworld".
 

 

CnC welcome!  I'm still new here so all adivce is appreciated :)
 

[Lonk]

I can see where your idea goes and I like it.  Unfortunately, your idea helps more than what you initially perceived it would do.  Dark Worlds and Infernities will make sweet love with this card, especially since Tour Guide exists.  But I digress, those two decks are degenerate and should have no reason to exist.  I would've made an argument how it would only work with Tour Guides, but by the time you summon this card, she won't be that useful anymore (unless if you detach Tour Bus).

 

In the department of grammar, there should be a colon where you put the comma in the first line after 'turn' and you want to move that semi-colon after 'material' while deleting that 'to.'  Put a period where you last had the Semi-Colon and reword the sentence to "Monsters with the same name as the added monster cannot be Summoned this turn."  Doing this will specify the timing of when you add the monster to the hand (The colon indicates the trigger/ignition, and the semi-colon indicates that everything between it and the colon happens before resolution i.e. when it starts a chain.  Anything after the semi-colon (or colon, if no semi-colon is present) is what happens during resolution).

 

8.5/10  Good effect if not abusable by certain Decks, you can work on punctuation placement but otherwise good grammar.  Welcome to YCM.

[Kitsuneko]

Wonderful art selection~ That was the thing that really caught my eye. Cool effect too.