clark6969 Posted November 28, 2013 Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 These are my first cards, First post as a matter of fact so I night not even be posting them right, so I hope to hear any feedback I can get on how to improve myself. tried to make them fair and balanced but let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToaCody Posted November 28, 2013 Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 Wording could use a little work, but otherwise I like the concepts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 28, 2013 Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 As the previous comment mentioned, u need to fix some OCG, but about its concept, I think Dragon-Type has enough supporst IMO, also I will point some cards - Dragon Boneyard is a bit OP, not only can return limited cards like Debris Dragon, but also a quick-play spell which mean u can use this when ur opponent's about to banished it, to balance it, it need to be a Normal Spell Card - Rial is ridiculous BROKEN, a once per turn Monster Reborn w/o any drawback such as 0 ATK or negated effect is too much for RC - Durian is OP, a return effect is a powerful effect so at least u should make it a Flip Effect or at least w/ some drawback, not to mention that only itself alone are outclassed the entire YGO' 1400 Attribute monsters - Dragon's Inferno is OP, a counter trap mean it can't be negated by Starlight Road or any effect at SS2, u should make it a Normal Trap Card to balance it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsuneko Posted November 28, 2013 Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 OCG needs a lot of fixing... So much fixing it's impossible for me to run you through it on my phone. Anyways, on the cards themselves... Rial and Durian are stupid and overpowered. Rial is a free monster reborn every turn that isn't even constrained by limits; I can literally run it in any deck and it would still be broken. Plus, it's easy to play, and has strong stats. Like... No offence but... Did you even stop to think about this thing called balance when you made that card? Durian has a monarch effect... Without needing tributes. Then once it dies... It special summons with the search versatility of sangan... A card that's banned... Except Durian has stats, dragon typing, and a cheap and easy fly by monarch compulse. Uh. Viirven is also ridiculous. Are you aware of this thing called synchro? I should also note that not a single one of these cards need to be destroyed to have their effect activate. I can synchro or tribute with Durian or Viirven and still get their broken effects. Uh... As for recommending fixes... Maybe you should play some games to get hands on experience with balance before you make cards... I can maybe help tomorrow, but tonight's a no no. Sorry if I come off as extraordinarily harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 well i'll not criticise u so much like the previous comments did, but i just wonder if u had ever played YGO before? these cards seems no balance, some are UP, some are very OP. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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