dandandalaxy3 Posted November 28, 2013 Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 I have :( news and :) news. :( news: I wasn't getting the reaction I wanted from the Attacker Units. :) news: I am making a new set! The Bestiae cards! These cards try to inflict damage to your opponent by drawing certain cards.. battle damage is just not their thing unlike attacker units who rely on battle damage! So here goes the first card! Don't scream or shout; however shouting 'I love it' will be accepted.Lore: Once per turn; during your opponent's Main Phase; when your opponent activates a Spell card you can discard 1 card and negate the activation of the Spell card. Then shuffle it into your deck. If this card is face-up on the field and you draw that Spell card; inflict 700 damage to your opponent for each 'Bestiae' monster you control.Comment on:The image (hopefully it's great).The ATK and DEF (I think it's about right)The effect (is it too OP or under powered)The OCG (I don't think I made too many mistakes)Thanks for looking at this card :) please give me some :) news and no :(. ;)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PinesolOfChaos Posted November 28, 2013 Report Share Posted November 28, 2013 You should make it a 'once while this card is face-up on the field effect'. And you could make it so that the card is shuffled into the deck face-up (in case you and your opponent are running copies of the same card). Kinda reminiscent of Grave Lure in a way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 You should make it a 'once while this card is face-up on the field effect'. And you could make it so that the card is shuffled into the deck face-up (in case you and your opponent are running copies of the same card). Kinda reminiscent of Grave Lure in a way. Good points when I make the archetype I'll think about that! Anybody else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 well i followed ur card since im not a member of this board yet, ur Attacker Units seem too OP since they're too much protecting-cards from both LP and cards destruction, about this card's effect, to take 1 of ur opponent Spell per turn by only discard a card is too OP, and yea the first comment said everything that will make this card balance, so i hope to see this card's archetype soon, finally, ur image is great :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 well i followed ur card since im not a member of this board yet, ur Attacker Units seem too OP since they're too much protecting-cards from both LP and cards destruction, about this card's effect, to take 1 of ur opponent Spell per turn by only discard a card is too OP, and yea the first comment said everything that will make this card balance, so i hope to see this card's archetype soon, finally, ur image is great :) Hooray my image is great! But yh thanks when I unleash the archetype it'll be a lot more balanced! If anyone else wants to comment I'd like comments on how to make an archetype out of these cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goonie Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 I feel like by the time you draw the Spell Card that you shuffled into your deck, you could do a bunch of things with this card, like Xyz + Synchro or to use it as maybe fodder for some stronger cards in the archetype, so the burn effect might really never go off. Other than that, it's a fun and creative design. One thing though, wouldn't both you and your opponent know when the stolen Spell is coming? Most people do run different colored sleeves after all. But I guess that makes it more fun haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 yh i know, i might say shuffle it into your deck face-up so u know that you're not cheating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Before I release the archetype (which I will) I'm gonna post one more card here: which is Bestiae frost! Comment on this one as well!Lore: Once per duel, you can shuffle this card into your deck face-up. When you draw this card Special Summon it and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand. This card isn't as OP as flare... I hope! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 u must not post another card in the comment and since u showed 2 of your cards in this archetype, I got it concept now, so your Bestiae series is focus on thinning the deck and get the face-up card in the deck to activate various effect (well I don't believe u r focusing on only burn, don't you?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 u must not post another card in the comment and since u showed 2 of your cards in this archetype, I got it concept now, so your Bestiae series is focus on thinning the deck and get the face-up card in the deck to activate various effect (well I don't believe u r focusing on only burn, don't you?) yep it's not just burn I'll focus on (but for now I will) and yh I soz about the posting another card in the comment... I just did! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted December 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2013 BUMP, remember to check out the archetype in multiple cards! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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