My next card! :P

[Rebirth09]

Hello, Rebirth here!  :D I have now made my second card and what do you think about it? 

 

Before I make high lvl monsters, I think it is best to start with weaker ones instead so that I learn the basics of it.

 

 

Effect: Once per turn; during your Main Phase; you can draw 1 card from the Deck. If it is a Monster card; put that card in the Graveyard. 

 

Btw should I keep posting on my topic I made before or create a new one? :o

 

[creeperfilms]

Nice start

[Unknown Duelist 2]

 

I made this card today :P

[Mugendramon]

Post your cards in your own topics, Unknown Duelist.

 

Now on to the card, it's essentially a reversed-less restrictive and less risky Black Rose Witch. Sending a monster too the graveyard will not usually be that bad and an extra draw out of nowhere, once per turn, is kind of ridiculous. Given how searchable this card is, how it can be recovered with Salvage, and all that other jizz; you should put a bit of a condition to that draw effect.

 

Now regarding your grammar, the current version of the card should be written like this:

 

Once per turn: you can draw 1 card. If it is a Monster card: put that card in the Graveyard. 

 

Specifying the main phase is unnecessary, as all ignition effects like this one can only be used in the Main Phase anyway. Same goes for drawing, you don't need to say it's from the deck; it's implied.

 

Always remember the formula; TIMING:COST+TARGETTING;EFFECT.

[werewolfjedi]

Post your cards in your own topics, Unknown Duelist.

 

Now on to the card, it's essentially a reversed-less restrictive and less risky Black Rose Witch. Sending a monster too the graveyard will not usually be that bad and an extra draw out of nowhere, once per turn, is kind of ridiculous. Given how searchable this card is, how it can be recovered with Salvage, and all that other jizz; you should put a bit of a condition to that draw effect.

 

Now regarding your grammar, the current version of the card should be written like this:

 

Once per turn: you can draw 1 card. If it is a Monster card: put that card in the Graveyard. 

 

Specifying the main phase is unnecessary, as all ignition effects like this one can only be used in the Main Phase anyway. Same goes for drawing, you don't need to say it's from the deck; it's implied.

 

Always remember the formula; TIMING:COST+TARGETTING;EFFECT.

I would add a requirement of turning this card from defense mode to attack mode when you draw. that makes it harder to use it the turn it's played, but if it survives 1 turn, it immediately gives return on the investment to protect it