Judgment of the "Altar" - A new Archetype

[jujumaster4]

This is my first time making an archetype, so this is probably broken, but I had loads of fun making it, so I thought I'd share it. xD

 

Monsters:

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Lore: "You can place up to 2 Judgment Counters on this card; if you do, its level decreases by 1 for every Judgment Counter you placed."

 

Lore: "If an "Altar" monster you control is destroyed by battle, you may place 1 Judgment Counter on the card that destroyed it."

 

Lore: "You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card if you control another face-up "Altar" monster. When this card is destroyed, you can pay 2000 Life Points; if you do, place 1 Judgment Counter on every card on the field. While in the Graveyard, this card cannot be moved by the effects of anything other than an Altar monster."

 

Lore: "When this card declares an attack, place 1 Judgment Counter on any card on the field."

 

Lore: "Tribute 1 LIGHT "Altar" monster during each of your Standby Phases or destroy this card. Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can reduce this card's ATK by 1000 and place 2 Judgment Counters on it to target and negate the effects of one card. If you do, place 1 Judgment Counter on that card."

 

Lore: "While you control this face-up card, "Altar" monsters you control (except this card) cannot be targeted by card effects. You can Tribute this card to place 1 Judgment Counter on every Spell and Trap Card on the field."

 

Lore: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 2 DARK "Altar" monsters from your Graveyard. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, destroy 1 card on the field that has a Judgment Counter on it."

 

Lore: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 2 LIGHT "Altar" monsters from your Graveyard. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, gain 200 Life Points for every Judgment Counter on the field."

 

Lore: "This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 2 LIGHT and 2 DARK "Altar" monsters from your Graveyard. This card is not affected by the effects of cards that have 1 or more Judgment Counters on them."

 

Lore: "This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effects of the Ritual Spell Card "Sacrifice to the Gods". Once per turn, you can place 1 Judgment Counter on every card on the field (except this card). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. If this card battles with a card that has 1 or more Judgment Counters on it, destroy that card before the Damage Step."

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Spells (now the Judgment Counters will make sense):

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Lore: "During the End Phase of each player's turn, all cards (except this card) that have 3 or more Judgment Counters on them have their effects negated and are destroyed. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove 2 Judgment Counters from it instead."

 

Lore: "Place 1 Judgment Counter on every card that you control; if you do, halve the ATK of one face-up monster your opponent controls."

 

Lore: "Place 2 Judgment Counters on one card your opponent controls and 3 Judgment Counters on one card you control that isn't 'Divine Judgment'."

 

Lore: "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Altar of the Gods". Banish 1 of each of the following monsters from your side of the field: 'Altar of Blood', 'Altar of Healing', and 'Altar of Judgment'."

 

Lore: "The equipped monster gains 600 ATK for every Judgment Counter on it. During the End Phase, place 1 Judgment Counter on both the equipped monster and this card."

 

Lore: "Decrease the ATK of every face-up monster on the field with 1 or more Judgment Counter(s) on it by 500."

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Traps:

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Lore: "Remove any number of Judgment Counters from the field from cards of your choice; if you do, you can Special Summon (from your hand) one "Altar" monster whose level is equal to the number of Judgment Counters you removed."

 

Lore: "Negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card that has 1 or more Judgment Counter(s) on it, and if you do, destroy it."

 

Lore: "When a card that you control is destroyed by the effect of "Divine Judgment", you can draw one card."

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I appreciate all feedback! :)

[-Noel-]

First of all pls put a card's lore (its effect) under each of your card (u can see other members' topic that how they do about it. If u do so other members that want to review and give some useful opinion to u will analyze your cards' effect and review it easier

For the first cards set, that's nice, don't worry about balance since I think u made it well-balanced, also your OCG (Original Card Grammar) are quite well, just a few errors that u can learn and fix them later, keep this up ;)

[jujumaster4]

Thank you for the tips, I've put the lore for each card beneath each image. :)

 

I'm glad (and a tiny bit surprised) you think this is pretty good. :P

[-Noel-]

Yea it's really great for a first created cards. To be honest, unlike u, my first cards set is very failed, well I have to learn many things from this site before creating my second and most successful archetype (my sig :))