Dragon Pride, and Dragon Dominance

[Greencore21]

First off, I would like to say the art work which was available to me to use is fantastic, credit to JazinKay. (And the topic saying where we can obtain good pictures for our cards, encase we cant make them ourselves very well.) 

Secondly, I am new to this area, and I am greatly enjoying this card creator and I am making some cards.  Say what you think, I want to know if they were good or not.

 

 

Dragon Dominance, a (Normal) trap card used to protect your monster.  Similar to Mirror Force in a way, but only single targeted to the monster attacking you and you must pay 1000 life points to do so. (Trying to balance it out so its not just a free use.)

 

 

Effect:  Activate only when your opponent declares an attack on a dragon type monster on your side of the field.  Destroy that attacking monster and discard a card to special summon a dragon type monster with 1500 ATK or less from your deck.

 

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Dragon Pride, a continuous spell card.

 

 

Effect: Discard two cards in order to activate. Once activated, nothing may attack unless it is a dragon type monster. Everything else must be placed in defense position, unable to attack.

 

 

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Not a single card, just saying.

2 can be posted at once IF you click the image in the Card maker.

A URL should pop up. USE IT. =D

 

And the first card is even outclassed by Sakeretsu Armor.

 

And the Original Card Grammar needs work.

[-Noel-]

First off, there are 2 cards here so u should repost this in Multiple Cards section, next, next time u post a card pls just click at your card's image in generator, then the bbcode for that card's image will appear, just copy it and post here, finally your cards need many OCG fixing, the first trap if I didn't misunderstand it, is immediately destroyed w/o allow a chain? considering from cost and condition, this way is better than to just make some card that completely outclassed by Sakuretsu or D.Prison, also your second card, well u need to understand first that all Yugioh Continuous Spell/Trap need to be face-up on the field to resolving their effect (except for some recently Fire-Formation) so u didn't need that last part

[Greencore21]

@TechGenusMaster 
I'll try to work out the grammar problems. I'm not entirely sure how they word everything in descriptions for YGO cards, so I just tried. :)  Thank you for the feedback.

And the paying 1000 seemed a little... Over the head. I don't want it to be exactly the same as Sakeretsu Armor, because whats the fun in that. :D  I'll probably lower the LP cost or even make you have to discard/banish something.

@-Someone-

Understood.  I'm kind of funky with using forums sometimes, so I'll try in a bit. :)
Ill work on reposting it now.

 

 

 

EDIT:   I made some changes to both cards. Made Dragon Dominance a wee bit better.   Also, this post has been re-made in the right section. (I think)

[goddamnit names are a pain]

@TechGenusMaster 
I'll try to work out the grammar problems. I'm not entirely sure how they word everything in descriptions for YGO cards, so I just tried. :)  Thank you for the feedback.

And the paying 1000 seemed a little... Over the head. I don't want it to be exactly the same as Sakeretsu Armor, because whats the fun in that. :D  I'll probably lower the LP cost or even make you have to discard/banish something.

 

The point is that there shouldn't really be a cost. Maybe scrap it, or add a better effect.

Pop 2? Pop 1, Draw one? Pop One, opponent discards?  idk

 

EDITS

Or that. Not bad.

Ok, time for OCG

 

Discard 2 cards. Monsters cannot attack, except Dragon-type monsters. 

Got rid of last part since a bit much. Also, not sure how to correct OCG on it.

 

Other card.

 

Activate only when your opponent declares an attack involving (Not sure here) a Dragon-type monster you control. Destroy that attacking monster, and if you do: discard 1 card to Special Summon a Dragon-type monster with 1500 or less ATK from your deck.

 

Hope this helps. I got stuck on 2 parts though, sorry.