a fan-made archetype cards

[napster16]

I made these cards based on existing cards. I know it's strange, but I can explain where I got their effects. I just wanted to create cards that have the same effect of the deck that I use, like "The Thief" which is based on Jinzo. I quite liked the archetypes created and then decided to create one when I found this site. I hope you enjoy.

Sorry for my english, im brazilian...

 

At the start of the Damage Step, if this card battles a DARK monster: Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points and destroy that monster.

Cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. You can only control 1 "Lost Legends The Warrior". Double any Battle Damage your opponent takes when they attack this monster. This card gains 400 ATK for each "Lost Legends" monster you control. Your opponent cannot attack any face-up "Lost Legend" monsters, except this one.

If this face-up card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Trap Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. When this card is on your Spell & Trap Card Zone: Trap Cards cannot be activated and the effects of all Trap Cards on the field are negated.

When an attack is declared involving this card and an opponent's monster: You can activate this effect; during this battle involving this monster, neither player takes any battle damage, also destroy the opponent's monster after damage calculation.

If this face-up card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. When this card is on your Spell & Trap Card Zone, once per turn when a Spell Card is activated: Discard 1 card; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy it.

Cannot be Special Summoned. While you control a face-up "Lost Legends" monster with a different name, this card can attack your opponent directly. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can return it to your hand.

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Must first be Synchro Summoned. All face-up monsters on the field lose 500 ATK, except this card. The effects of your opponent's monsters that this card destroys by battle are negated.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate". All face-up monsters on the field lose 700 ATK, except this card. The effects of your opponent's monsters that this card destroys by battle are negated. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Lost Legends Jin Knifenose" from your Graveyard.

[AzNPaladin]

Is that....?

No, it couldn't possibly be EDWARD KENWAY!!

(P.S. - Is Companion from Vindictus?)

 

Few Errors

1. You have multiple cards, so this shouldn't be in the Realistic - Single Card section, but rather in the Realistic - Multiple Cards section.

2. There is no lore (card effects) under the cards. This allows other card makers to correct your OCG (Official Card Grammar) mistakes.

[napster16]

yes, as your card is a character from smite. the concept is a group of rpg and jin knifenose, is my character. he's a pirate. And who better to represent a pirate like Edward K.

better explain his mistake number 2. I thought this site was to create cards for the purpose of fun. and others to analyze the cards.

 

and sorry again, its my first post.

[razzy]

They all seem good. Except a few errors in text.

[AzNPaladin]

yes, as your card is a character from smite. the concept is a group of rpg and jin knifenose, is my character. he's a pirate. And who better to represent a pirate like Edward K.

better explain his mistake number 2. I thought this site was to create cards for the purpose of fun. and others to analyze the cards.

 

and sorry again, its my first post.

OK, its fine. I'm aware that some people don't speak (or read) English as well as others.

So, what you did wrong was not put the card's effect (like when you typed up the cards, you written the card's text. Copy those texts under cards.) under the card so people can correct your mistake.

The purpose of this site is to create cards, and have fun, that can be put in competitive play. (Or at least in the Realistic section that is.)

[napster16]

They all seem good. Except a few errors in text.

Thank you.

you could tell me the mistakes? to fix them.