White Knight cards

[goldenapples]

[spoiler=legendary white knight Gawain][attachment=40226:legendary white knight Gawain.jpg]

2 level 4"White Knight" monsters

When this monster is xyz summoned: Add 1 "White Knight" card from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed: you can detach 1 Xyz Material instead.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=Legendary White Knight Galahad][attachment=40225:legendary white knight galahad.jpg]

3 level 4"White Knight" monsters

When this Monster is Xyz Summoned: Add 1 "White Knight" card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn,during either players turn, when this card attacks or is attacked, you can detach 2 Xyz Material from this card;during the end of the battle step, the Monster that battled with this card is destroyed. while this card has Xyz Material, it cannot be destroyed in battle.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=Legendary White Knight Lancelot][attachment=40231:legendary white knight lancelot.jpg]

2 level 8"White Knight" monsters

if this card is attacking, any Monster that battles with this card is destroyed during the end of the battle. this card cannot be destroyed in battle while it has Xyz Material. if this card destroys a monster in battle or by its effect; You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent x the level or rank of the opponent's Monster that was destroyed.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=Legendary White Knight  King Arthur][attachment=40230:legendary white knight king arthur.jpg]

3 level 8"White Knight" monsters

Any Monster that battles with this card is destroyed during the end of the battle. this card cannot be destroyed in battle while this card has Xyz Material. if this card destroys a Monster in battle; you can inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent x the level or rank of the opponent's Monster. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material to target 1 Warrior-type Monster in the Graveyard; Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position.

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So what does everyone think? any helpful tips and such? next up is the White knight Spell and Trap cards!

Thanks to TrueMalice for the Assistance in wording for OCG, thanks !

[TrueMalice]

I'll comment on the needed OCG issues before moving on.

 

When this monster is Xyz Summoned: Add 1 "White Knight" card from your Deck to your hand. If this card would be destroyed: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead.

 

Xyz, Summon, card names, Deck and Material are always capitalized. A colon, as in :, is used to show the conditions in which an effect can activate. It might be worth looking at the description for the other cards and fixing those up, if you want to. 

[goldenapples]

thanks for the point outs. this seems to be my biggest flaw with this, but i will fix them up soon.

[Zextra]

There is more than one card here, so this topic will be moved to Realistic Cards - Multiple Cards.