Machine support - Cyborg Evolution

[shadegara2]

Rise my demonic invention power upon power, enhanced to the very MAX!

Opinions on this card would be great.

 

Thanks

[Norbi2001]

Get a Lore/Card Effect under the card!

OCG Fix:

The Equiped Monster this turn may not Declare an attack or change battle position, Also the epuiped Monster be targeted by Battle,Card effect or Spell/Traps Until the end phase. Every end phase the equipeed monster gains 500 ATK and it's level is incrreaed by 1, Also it is Treated as a Machine-Type Monster. If so You must Discard 3 Cards every time this effect resolves.

[razzy]

No offense but really needs some ocg (grammar) fixes. I can't even begin to tell what this card is supposed to be doing.

For example the person above me wrote a lore that is completely different from what I was thinking you meant for the card to do.

 

Equip only to a monster you control. The equipped monster becomes Machine-Type and cannot be targeted by other card effects. The equipped monster cannot attack or change its battle position until the end of this turn. At (each of?) (your / your opponent's?) End Phase, increase the equipped monster's Level by 1, and ATK by 500. The Level and ATK gain of this card is permanent (even if this card leaves the field). Once per turn: You may discard 3 cards (from your hand? maybe you meant from the top of your Deck??); the equipped monster gains 200 ATK.

 

I think I like what the card is trying to do. Just needs a clearer message. The fact of a permanent ATK gain is scary and is what I think would help equip spells see more play.

[shadegara2]

Josholche the ocg fix is correct with the ability I originally made.
There is no each of and the fill in words would be your and from your hand.