The "Armored" Duo

[SuperbX]

I was bored so I decided to make some cards.

 

 

Armored Scout

Level 4 EARTH Warrior

1800/300

 

When this card is Normal Summoned: Flip the top card of your Deck face-up. You can pay 500 Life Points; Draw 1 card, you can only use this effect of "Armored Scout" once per duel.

 

 

Armored Heavy Infantry

Level 4 EARTH Warrior

1800/300

 

When this card is Normal Summoned: Flip the top card of your opponent's Deck face-up.

You can pay 500 Life Points; Banish the top card of your opponent's Deck face-down, you can only activate this effect of "Armored Heavy Infantry" once per duel.

 

Criticism and OCG corrections are always much appreciated. Cheers.

[Nightmare Stomper]

When this card is Normal Summoned: Flip the top card of your opponent's Deck face-up. Then, you can pay 500 Life Points; Banish the top card of your opponent's Deck, face-down. You can only activate this effect of "Armored Heavy Infantry" once per duel. 

 

There's no space, and as I understand you seem to desire an effect that occurs after the excavation. Unless I don't understand.

 

 

When this card is Normal Summoned: Flip the top card of your Deck face-up. Then, you can pay 500 Life Points; Draw 1 card. You can only use the effect of "Armored Scout" once per duel.

 

 Just a few minor errors, that is all.

 

I like your cards. but maybe consider making the heavy soldier 1600/1750 as he is heavy and will naturally be slower. ;)

[SuperbX]

When this card is Normal Summoned: Flip the top card of your opponent's Deck face-up. Then, you can pay 500 Life Points; Banish the top card of your opponent's Deck, face-down. You can only activate this effect of "Armored Heavy Infantry" once per duel. 

 

There's no space, and as I understand you seem to desire an effect that occurs after the excavation. Unless I don't understand.

 

 

When this card is Normal Summoned: Flip the top card of your Deck face-up. Then, you can pay 500 Life Points; Draw 1 card. You can only use the effect of "Armored Scout" once per duel.

 

 Just a few minor errors, that is all.

 

I like your cards. but maybe consider making the heavy soldier 1600/1750 as he is heavy and will naturally be slower. ;)

Nope the effects are supposed to be separate. But I don't know if that'd make them too strong, so maybe it should be not separate.

And I made the stats that way because Elemental HERO Stratos stats would be appropriate for them, and it's not like you're ever going to set them.

[Nightmare Stomper]

Ah good point about their stats. Hm.The fact that the effects are separate is kind of stupid; I honestly think that re-iterating them to combine their effects would benefit you here, good sir.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

I feel like the Once Per Duel is a bit much. But once per turn and the second guy would be too strong. Assuming he stays alive. 

Maybe just me, I'm not sure.

 

I like how you did these guys though. (first one's my favorite)