Guardian Of The Earth: Ziggurat

[Goldendragonslayer922]

This is the 2nd card that I have ever made so please feel free to comment on it and help me improve.

 

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I also plan on making more Guardian cards like the Guardian Of The Water.

[Slinky]

Uhhhhh, for something that is ridiculously easy to summon, that effect is quite powerful, maybe tone that down a bit.

Also, can you put the lore beneath the card?

 

So, if you banish monsters from the graveyard... this card is in your hand... why does the card text say to exclude it? its not like you can banish it in the first place. lol

 

Also, you don't need to say EARTH attribute, just EARTH is enough.

 

Card text would look something like this:

 

You can banish 2 EARTH monsters from your graveyard to Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You may banish 1 EARTH monster in your graveyard; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower EARTH monster from your deck. That monster's effects are negated, and cannot activate any of its effects.

 

I went ahead and added that last part, because if the card tributed itself as a cost to activate the effect, it would be able to bypass this cards restrictions.

[Scary Face]

Uhhhhh, for something that is ridiculously easy to summon, that effect is quite powerful, maybe tone that down a bit.
Also, can you put the lore beneath the card?

So, if you banish monsters from the graveyard... this card is in your hand... why does the card text say to exclude it? its not like you can banish it in the first place. lol

Also, you don't need to say EARTH attribute, just EARTH is enough

Card text would look something like this:

You can banish 2 EARTH monsters from your graveyard to Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You may banish 1 EARTH monster in your graveyard; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower EARTH monster from your deck. That monster's effects are negated, and cannot activate any of its effects.

I went ahead and added that last part, because if the card tributed itself as a cost to activate the effect, it would be able to bypass this cards restrictions.

hey, how could anyone who still use stupid "may" can do OCG fix? here's the correct one
"You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 2 EARTH monster from your Graveyard. Once per turn: You can banish 1 EARTH monster from your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 EARTH monster from your Deck. Its effects are negated.

also it's effect pretty balance there, banish 1 to ss 1 w/ effects negated, completely outclassed by Hoot, so how OP it is? for TC, the only thing u need to fix is its stat, a 2800 which just need 2 EARTH seem so high, u should fix it into 2200-2400 ATK, and any DEF which not high than 2400, it's effect already balanced though

[Goldendragonslayer922]

Thanks for the comments! I have edited it and I'll just post it here cuz im too lazy to edit my first post.

 

 

Lore: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 2 EARTH monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn: You can banish 1 EARTH monster from your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower EARTH monster from your deck. Its effects are negated.

 

What I meant eariler with my old version of the card is that when you banish the 2 EARTH monsters if you have another Earth Guardian: Ziggurat in your graveyard you cant banish him. Sorry about that.

 

 

I also lower the ATK to 2400 and raise the DEF a bit to 2600. Just thought I'd do that. =)

[JellyNinja]

Pretty cool, so how many earth guardians are u planning to make? BTW thx i need a image source for my pics if anyone can help me with that ;) Keep up the good work goldendragonslayer922!