Pirate of the Seven Seas

[JellyNinja]

This is my first card I made on this website. Feel free to give advice to me.

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Lore: 2 Level 6 WATER monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 card on the field, destroy that target. When this card has no Xyz Material: Destroy this card. When this card is targeted for an attack: Special Summon a WATER monster from your Graveyard with 1000 or less ATK.

Yes, I know that the picture is Gangplank from League of Legends, but I couldn't find any better picture to fit the name and everything.

BTW thanks to GoldenDragonSlayer922 for helping me! Check him out!

 

CHANGED: I raised the ATK from 2000 to 2200.

[Goldendragonslayer922]

Thanks for the shoutout JellyNinja!

 

Its a good card no lore problems that I see (cuz I was with him when he made it). I would buy that card its not too OP good balance and everything. I would rate it about 6/10 but for me anything above 5 is great and would be added to my deck (My voting system is harsh =P). Good on balance (Not so harsh).

 

Have fun on the website Jelly!

[newhat]

I see few feasible ways to Summon this and fewer ways to use it. For 2 Level 6 monsters you get a pop a turn on a 2000 body. If your opponent is attacking it, it is probably going to die, so the WATER monster isn't much of a trade.

 

Frognarchs could make it with Mobius and Snatcher, Ice Barriers could make it with Synchros and a Prior-dropped Level 6, and Gishkis could make it with Ritual Monsters. Of those three, Ice Barriers seem the best, since they can defend GP with Traps and things to keep the revived monster on the field, but it's still a lot of effort for an average effect. 

[JellyNinja]

Thanks for the advice I'll look into changing some things for the attack points.