TIBONE LUIS Posted December 30, 2013 Report Share Posted December 30, 2013 ATK/ 1000 DEF/1000 Effect:Discard a Fiend-Type monster: Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per a turn, during your Main Phase: You can equip this card to another face-up Fiend-Type monster you control or unequip it to Special Summon this monster in face-up Attack Position. The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead). If this card is destroyed while equipped a monster: Add 1 monster with 1000 or less ATK and DEF to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted December 30, 2013 Report Share Posted December 30, 2013 This says equip to another face-up card you control. So that means you would have to summon this first? I think its an okay effect, but no one would really want to tribute for this and waste your NS. Especially not for a monster that can get easily hit during your opponent's next round. It's better off being Level 4 or lower. I understand that it searches a high level monster with 1000 or less attack (Uria, Yubel, etc.), but It wouldn't be worth it. I'd rather take my chances with Duality or something. I'd say you should lover the level by 1 or narc the Union effect and make it an Equip Monster Card that targets... maybe the same type or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted December 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2013 I made some improvements, do you think that I evened out the high cost? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted December 30, 2013 Report Share Posted December 30, 2013 my consideration is: look at the picture; does it look like a LIGHT monster to you? Usually LIGHT monsters look like Ryko, Lyla, Priestess and so on...i would set it as DARK....nice card however, maybe if it had another kind of eff, it could have become a Killer-card for my Crimson Army Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted December 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2013 It's attribute has more to do with what it represents, which is Astarte the former Queen of the Heavens, known as the Mother of Harlots and Abominations to others. If you look at most of my cards they have cultural reference and I do not overlook most details.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Babalon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted December 31, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2013 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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JACMaker Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 I never have been a fan of Union Monsters, but great image for the card. Also, I think light suits it just fine. [spoiler=OCG Fixes] You can discard 1 Fiend-Type monster: Special Summon from your hand this card. Once per a turn: during your Main Phase you can to another target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to the target, OR: unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped by this effect, the equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF. If this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster: search add from your Deck to your hand for 1 monster with 1000 or less ATK and DEF, the deck is then shuffled. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle or a card effect, destroyed this card is instead.)[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Thanks for the input, I'll make sure to fix that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razzy Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Looks pretty decent. Any reason why it is a Lv5? Lastly ygo doesn't use the whole "search deck, then shuffle deck" it is usually just worded "Add __ from your Deck to your hand." You can discard 1 Fiend-Type monster, Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per a turn, during your Main Phase: You can equip this card to another face-up Fiend-Type monster you control or unequip it to Special Summon this monster in face-up Attack Position. The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle or a card effect, this card is destroyed instead. When this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster: Add 1 monster with 1000 or less ATK and DEF from your Deck to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Okay now I think it should be perfect, thank you all for your help :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
121092 Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Ha! LOVE the mythology! Strong but workable union monster. With Vorse Raider or something, this would already be a challenging cookie. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Lol, thanks, so you get the reference to Babylonian/Christian mythology? The Scarlet Woman and the Beast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BleuConviction Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Fiend/Union interesting... good work on the card. Also I like how when it's destroyed you can fish for another one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qliphort Tool Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 I can see this in DW deck, discard Grapha for ss cost if you really didn't get Trade-in, equip this to Grapha, get a 4k beater if you already have gate, also when you tribute Grapha for a stuff like Virus, you can add TGU or sth else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2014 Fiends are my fav monster type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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