Careenosaurus Archetype

[Sora1499]

Careenosaurus Velocity Raptor
{WIND/Level 4/Dinosaur/Effect}
When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can destroy 1 "Careenosaurus" monster you control. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard, then you can add 1 "Careenosaurus" card from your Deck to your hand except for "Careenosaurus Velocity Raptor."
1800/1500

Careenosaurus Pachy Pouncer
{WIND/Level 4/Dinosaur/Tuner}
When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can destroy 1 "Careenosaurus" monster you control. When this card is destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 card on the field; destroy that target. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard, then all face-up "Careenosaurus" monsters you currently control gain 500 ATK and DEF, until the End Phase.
1900/1800

Careenosaurus Thunceratops
{WIND/Level 4/Dinosaur/Effect}
When this card is Normal Summoned; You can destroy 1 "Careenosaurus" monster you control. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard, then you can target 1 Level 4 or lower "Careenosaurus" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target.
1600/2000

Careenosaurus Lillylina
{WIND/Level 4/Dinosaur/Tuner}
When a "Careenosaurus" monster(s) is destroyed or Special Summoned: You can Special Summon this card from your hand, then apply 1 of the following effects:
*Draw 1 card.
*Destroy 1 "Careenosaurus" monster you control.
If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.
1600/1400

Careenosaurus Terra Dactyl
{WIND/Level 3/Dinosaur/Tuner}
When this card is Normal Summoned; You can target 1 Level 4 or lower "Careenosaurus" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard
1200/1000

Careenosaurus Seismic Saurus
{WIND/Level 4/Dinosaur/Effect}
When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: You can destroy 1 "Careenosaurus" monster you control. When this card is destroyed by a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard: You can add 1 "Careenosaurus" card from your Graveyard to your hand, except for "Careenosaurus Seismic Saurus." If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard, and if you do, "Careenosaurus" monsters cannot be destroyed by battle for the rest of the turn.
1900/1500

Careenosaurus Armor Ankos
{WIND/Level 4/Dinosaur/Effect}
When this card is Normal Summoned; You can send 1 "Careenosaurus" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. Once per turn: You can Normal Summon 1 "Careenosaurus" monster as an additional Normal Summon/Set, but if you do, this card is destroyed during the End Phase. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.
1700/2200

Careenosaurus Giganodon
{WIND/Level 7/Dinosaur/Synchro/Effect}
1 Dinosaur-Type Tuner + 1 or more Dinosaur-Type non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can target 1 Level 4 or lower "Careenosaurus" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target. You can only use this effect of "Careenosaurus Giganodon" once per turn. Once per turn, when a "Careenosaurus" monster you control battles, at the start of the Battle Step: You can have the ATK of the other battling monster become 0. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.
2500/2200

Careenosaurus T-Wrecks
{WIND/Level 8/Dinosaur/Synchro/Effect}
1 Dinosaur-Type Tuner + 1 or more Dinosaur-Type non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned; You can draw 1 card. You can only use this effect of "Careenosaurus T-Wrecks" once per turn. Once per turn, during either turn: You can target 1 other "Careenosaurus" monster you control and 1 card your opponent controls; destroy those targets. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard
2900/2600

Careenosaurus Alloyjaw
{WIND/Rank 4/Dinosaur/Xyz/Effect}
2 Level 4 Dinosaur-Type monsters
When this card is Xyz Summoned; You can add 1 "Careenosaurus" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Careenosaurus Alloyjaw" once per turn. Once per turn, during either turn, when a "Careenosaurus" monster you control is targeted by a card or an effect: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; negate that effect. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard, then you can attach 1 "Careenosaurus" monster in your Graveyard to this card as Xyz Material.
2400/2100

Careenosaurus Crash
{Spell/Normal}
Target 1 "Careenosaurus" monster you control; destroy that target, then you can add 1 "Careenosaurus" monster from your Deck to your hand. This card cannot be added from the Deck or Graveyard to the hand.

Careenosaurus Battlezone
{Spell/Continuous}
Once per turn, when a "Careenosaurus" monster(s) is destroyed: You can gain 1000 LP. You can Synchro Summon and Xyz Summon "Careenosaurus" Synchro and Xyz Monsters during your Battle Phase if you use only "Careenosaurus" monsters that have not declared an attack this turn as the Synchro or Xyz Material.

Careenosaurus Rampage
{Trap/Normal}
Target 1 "Careenosaurus" monster you control; that target gains 1000 ATK, until the end of the Battle Phase. Each time it destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyad, draw 1 card. During the End Phase, destroy that target.

I had a lot of fun making these. What do you guys think?

[Origin 뮤]

Quite honestly, I love these cards. I am fairly inexperienced, and on top of that out of practiced, card maker, so I probably am not too good of judge on whether these are overpowered or not, but I don't see anything that shows sign of the Elemental Dragon-disease. I think that dinosaurs need something like this to give them a fighting chance, because they have been neglected...pretty much since the start of the game. Jurrac and Evols were okay, I remember a time when Jurracs was a pretty decent deck, but the current format is not too forgiving. Anyway, back to the cards. The dynamic is very interesting, and the naming scheme is very clever. Their speed would no doubt make it hard for an opponent to get a good control of the field, because it would be difficult for them to lock it down, as there is a lot of special summoning and destruction, meaning that cards like Fiendish Chain(or Spell Binding Circle I guess) would prove fairly ineffective in the long run. There is the obvious weakness of effect destruction, through cards such as Mirror Force or Ryko, so I might suggest adding a spell or trap that gives protection from that for a turn, maybe. Or perhaps a continuous spell/trap card that makes it so that effect destruction is treated as battle destruction. Obviously balancing them might be a little tricky, but I think a Cyber Zone/Swords of Revealing Light clause of self-destruction after so many turns would do the trick. I noticed only a few errors when I was browsing through them

 

 

Careenosaurus Alloyjaw
{WIND/Rank 4/Dinosaur/Xyz/Effect}
2 Level 4 Dinosaur-Type monsters
When this card is Xyz Summoned; You can add 1 "Careenosaurus" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Careenosaurus Alloyjaw" once per turn. Once per turn, during either turn, when a "Careenosaurus" monster you control is targeted by a card or an effect: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; negate that effect. If this card was destroyed by the effect of a "Careenosaurus" card and sent to the Graveyard, then during the next Battle Phase: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard, then you can attach 1 card  monster in your Graveyard to this card as Xyz Material.
2400/2100

 

Now that could of course be intentional, as we have seen spell and trap cards become Xyz Materials before, but I feel like it should say monster

 

The only other error that I found skimming through was a typo in Rampage in the first word, I am sure you will find it if you give it a second look.

 

Sorry I couldn't give too much insight, but just wanted to share my praise of the cards. Very nice! :D

[Sora1499]

I'm glad you like them ^-^ I'll fix the errors in a bit, and I'll consider giving them a blanket immunity card

[Sora1499]

Updated with changes.