Giant Teddy of Doom {Standalone Xyz}

[:^)]

 

3 Level 3 monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 face-up card on the field; destroy that target, then Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. Its effects are negated. While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can conduct their Battle Phase during a turn they Special Summon a monster(s), or Special Summon monster(s) during a turn where they conducted their Battle Phase. You can only control 1 face-up  "Giant Teddy of Doom". If this card has 1 or less Xyz Material, it cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

This is the first card I've made in a while, yay? CnC & OCG Fixes are welcome.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Special Summon, to your side of the field, I assume?
I would add in a drawback, cuz geez. Pop into revival sounds bad.

[:^)]

Special Summon, to your side of the field, I assume?
I would add in a drawback, cuz geez. Pop into revival sounds bad

 

Of course to your side :P

 

What kind of drawback would you suggest?

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Lets see...several options.

Life Points

Skip Battle Phase (not draw back during Opponent's turn)

Eff Negated

ATK DEF 0

 

Or all of the last three into one.

 

Discard a card?

Benefit the opponent too?

 

Right now, it can pop a boss and revive it.

Maybe limit the revives to EARTHs or Machines.

[:^)]

Lets see...several options.

Life Points

Skip Battle Phase (not draw back during Opponent's turn)

Eff Negated

ATK DEF 0

 

Or all of the last three into one.

 

Discard a card?

Benefit the opponent too?

 

Right now, it can pop a boss and revive it.

Maybe limit the revives to EARTHs or Machines.

 

How is this

 

"3 Level 3 monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Target 1 face-up card on the field and destroy it, then Special Summon 1 EARTH or Machine-Type monster from either player's Graveyard, it's effect is negated. You can only control 1 face-up  "Giant Teddy of Doom". If this card has 1 or less Xyz Material, it cannot attack your opponent directly."

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Wrong it's.

Machina Fortress makes a nice combo, along with Peacekeeper. Sadly, not going to get played due to 3 level 3s being needed.

What be yo summoning methods?

[:^)]

Wrong it's.

Machina Fortress makes a nice combo, along with Peacekeeper. Sadly, not going to get played due to 3 level 3s being needed.

What be yo summoning methods?

 

I was thinking Dark Worlds/Mermails but I made it Earth/Machine from either Graveyard, so I'm changing it to any 1 monster but from your Graveyard.

 

Also changed the effect a bit.

 

"3 Level 3 monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Target 1 face-up card on the field and destroy it, then Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. That monster's effect(s) is negated. While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can conduct their Battle Phase during a turn where they Special Summon a monster, or Special Summon a monster during a turn where they conduct their Battle Phase. You can only control 1 face-up  "Giant Teddy of Doom". If this card has 1 or less Xyz Material, it cannot attack your opponent directly."

[goddamnit names are a pain]

I like it. Works nice this way. Drawbacks for all, and a neat effect for you. 

Almost worth 3 Level 3s, but I don't know what else is.

[Slinky]

Gievn the current cards wording, This card can't target. Everything after the semi-colon happens at resolution.  Game mechanics state that targeting can only occur at the activation. So mightttt want to fix that.

 

I also have mixed feelings about also SSing a monster by nuking a face-up card.

[razzy]

Although it is somewhat "pricey" needing 3 Level 3s, getting back any monster from grave seems like a very good effect, especially when combined with destroying an opponent's card.

- Maybe make it so you cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activate the effect?

And as Dyson said targeting typically occurs during activation, so some wording needs fixed.

Here is some help with that:

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 face-up card on the field; destroy that target, then Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. Its effects are negated. While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can conduct their Battle Phase during a turn they Special Summon a monster(s), or Special Summon monster(s) during a turn where they conducted their Battle Phase. You can only control 1 face-up  "Giant Teddy of Doom". If this card has 1 or less Xyz Material, it cannot attack your opponent directly.

The following is just a suggestion/idea:

 

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 face-up card on the field; destroy that target, and if you do, Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. its effects are negated. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate and resolve this effect. You can only control 1 face-up  "Giant Teddy of Doom". If this card has no Xyz Material, it cannot attack your opponent directly.

[:^)]

Although it is somewhat "pricey" needing 3 Level 3s, getting back any monster from grave seems like a very good effect, especially when combined with destroying an opponent's card.

- Maybe make it so you cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activate the effect?

Cant conduct Battle Phase when you Special Summon. Effect makes you Special Summon.

And as Dyson said targeting typically occurs during activation, so some wording needs fixed.

Here is some help with that:

The following is just a suggestion/idea:

Alright thanks!