Giant of the Frozen North

[JACMaker]

This is my second card on this site. My first card was a written card, because the Card Maker was down at that point in time. Let me know what you think of this card and please feel free to give feedback on improving this card. Thanks in advance.

 

 

[spoiler=Written Card Form]Giant of the Frozen North

WATER | Level 8

[Dragon/Effect]
When Normal Summoned, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards this turn. Once per turn: You can target up to 3 unoccupied Monster Card Zones; those targets cannot be used until the start of your next turn. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase: You can target 1 of your unusable Monster Card Zones; that target can be used, then Special Summon 1 Level 8 or lower WATER Dragon-Type monster from your hand or Deck, except "Giant of the Frozen North".

ATK/2800 DEF/3000[/spoiler]

[newhat]

"When Summoned" shouldn't have a colon because it's Continuous.

 

It's OK for restricting your opponent but the offensive Special Summon effect is slow. There aren't many good targets. Snow Dragon? Blizzard Dragon?

[JACMaker]

"When Summoned" shouldn't have a colon because it's Continuous.

 

It's OK for restricting your opponent but the offensive Special Summon effect is slow. There aren't many good targets. Snow Dragon? Blizzard Dragon?

 

Fixed the, "When Summoned," clause and improved it by speeding up the summoning and changing it to, "Level 8 or lower," without summoning a second copy. By the way, I didn't realize that "Snow Dragon", "Blizzard Dragon", "Powered Tuner", and "Stream, Dragon Ruler of Droplets" are the only Level 4 and lower WATER Dragon-Type monsters. So, up to Level 8 gives it the ability to Xyz Summon. Also, I am going to make a support card for Synchro Summoning.