Wrath of the Insect Lord

[northernbehemoth]

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 The rest of the deck is a work in progress.

[JACMaker]

Your ideas should be more original as your cards have effects taken from several other cards, then you just tweaked them to be for Insect-Type monsters. Anyways, your OCG could use some work and I am glad to see Insects getting some support.

 

[spoiler=OCG Fixes][spoiler=Insect Lord Dreaded Khrillax]This card Must be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 Insect-Type monsters one of which (must include at least 1 "Krossah, Mother of Worms") and cannot be Summoned by other ways. When this card is targeted for an attacked: you can Special Summon from your hand or Graveyard 1 Level 7 Insect-Type monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Krossah, Mother of Worms]While this face-up card is on the field: all other Insect-Type monsters on the field gain 300 DEF. While this card is the highest Level monster on the field: it gains 400 DEF. Once per Duel: you can send to the Graveyard this card; send to the Graveyard all monsters on the field.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Destroyer Centipede]You can sending any to the Graveyard 1 Insect-Type monster with 2500 or more ATK; Special Summoned from your hand this card. When this card attacks a Defense Position monster: inflict up to 500 points of piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Armoured Attack Beetle]This card gains 200 ATK for each Insect-Type monster in your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle: target in your Graveyard 1 Insect-Type monster; Special Summon the target.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Soldier Beetle]During your Battle Phase when this card destorys any other card by battle a monster your opponent controls: it must attack a monster s  your opponent controls.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Larvae of the Insect Lord]When this card is Normal Summoned: add from your Deck to your hand 1 Level 7 or lower Insect-Type monster. You can send to the Graveyard this card: Special Summoned 1 Level 4 Insect-Type monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Hive of the Insect Lord]All Insect-Type monsters your control s  gain 200 ATK and DEF. Once per turn: you can Special Summon from your Graveyard 1 Insect-Type monster. Your opponent cannot banish Insect-Type monsters you control.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[razzy]

Just a few pointers. monster types are not fully capitalized. Only attributes such as DARK, LIGHT, FIRE, EARTH etc.. types are written as "Insect-type" "Plant-type" "Warrior-type" etc.

Level is usually written out in effects too. Also remember to put were the monster can be special summoned from in its effect (hand, deck, graveyard). That being said I'll try to help with what I can.

 

Insect Lord - Seems pretty weird to me for a card to require a specific tribute. Especially needing 2 others to go along with it. And I don't know who in their right mind would attack this thing to trigger the effect. Getting over 3400 is not an easy task, and even if I could I'd be hesitant of giving you a free monster.

Cannot be Special Summoned. Must be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 1 "Krossah, Mother of Worms" and 2 other Insect-type monsters. When this card is targeted for an attack: You can Special Summon 1 Level 7 Insect-type monster form your hand or Graveyard.

 

Khrossa - Typically it is not needed to say "when this card is on the field" anymore, so we can remove that bit. And stipulations such as once per turn/duel effects go after the effect itself.

All other Insect-type monsters gain 300 DEF. If this card is the highest Level monster on the field, it gains 400 DEF. You can send this card on the field to the Graveyard; send all other monsters on the field to the Graveyard. You can only use this effect of "Khrossah, Mother of Worms" once per duel.

 

Destroyer Centipede - Seems like a strong Level 6 with 2700 ATK, but I guess insects need it. Piercing damage is reserved for when attacking a DEF monster that has less DEF than you do ATK. So something with the last effect needs changed.

You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by sending one Insect-type monster anywhere on the field to the Graveyard. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. 

 

Armoured Attack Beetle - Seems kind of vanilla, but nothing wrong with that.

This card gains 200 ATK for each Insect-type monster in your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 other Insect-type monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target.

 

Solider Bettle - Strange effect, but it kind of unique. I'm not even really sure how to fix it. But I'll give it a shot.

The first time each Battle Phase this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, it must attack all other monsters your opponent currently controls, once each.

 

Larvae of the insect Lord -

When this card is Normal Summoned: Add 1 Level 7 or lower insect-type monster from your Deck to your hand. You can send this card on the field to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Insect-type monster from your hand.

 

Hive of the Insect Lord - There is a difference between what you have "When this card is activated all Insect-type monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF" and "All Insect-type monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF". The way you have it, only the Insect-type monsters you control when you first activate this card will get the boost as opposed to it being an on going effect. I'm going to assume you want it that way. I do think this is probably the most overpowered card of the set. Being an already better Miracle Fertilizer, while granting an ATK/DEF boost and protection is a lot...

Insect-type monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF. Your opponent cannot banish any Insect-type monsters you control. Once per turn: You can target 1 Insect-type monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target.