Cocodomoco Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Just for fun... [spoiler=Lore] Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) in face-up Defense Position by Tributing 3 face-up Fairy-Type monsters you control. When this card is Summoned: Banish all Fairy-Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card loses 500 DEF and gains 500 ATK for each card banished. When this card attacks, if this card has 4000 or more ATK: You can Banish 1 Fairy-Type monster(from your hand or graveyard), if you do not, destroy this card. When this card attacks your opponent directly, if this card has 5000 or more ATK: Destroy this card after damage calculation. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Major card grammar errors. This should be a little better. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card may only be Special Summoned in face up Defense Position by tributing 3 face-up Fairy-Type monsters you control. The turn this card is summoned banish all fairy monsters in your graveyard: This card loses 500 DEF and gains 500 ATK for each card banished. If this card declares an attack while it has 4000 or more ATK: Banish one Fairy-Type monster (from your hand or deck),if you are not able to destroy this face-up card after damage calculation. When declares a direct attack while this card's ATK is equal to 5000: Destroy this card after damage calculation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BleuConviction Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 I like the concept ( banishing cards to power up this beast of a card ) keep up the good work. However, there are many grammatical errors "if you do not destroy this face up card after damage calculation". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cocodomoco Posted January 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Edited grammar updated help greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Interesting card, and u should know that sacrifice and may are not the currently correct OCG, and for above, u should capitalize some word like Tribute, so this card's correct OCG should be " Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned in face-up Defense Position by Tributing 3 face-up Fairy-Type monsters you control. When this card is Summoned: Banish all Fairy-Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card loses 500 DEF and gains 500 ATK for each of banished cards. When this card attacks, if this card has 4000 or more ATK: You can Banish 1 Fairy-Type monster from your hand or Deck, if you do not, destroy this card. When this card attacks your opponent directly, if this card has 5000 or more ATK: Destroy this card after damage calculation. and sorry for some delay, I'm using a phone and that take some time to bold a word Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Btw how the hell would it get 4000 or 5000 atk? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 So easy, just banish 8 Fairy when Summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qliphort Tool Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Banish all monsters for only 1 monster seem high risk, not to mention that this card has no protection from card effects, so you may ruin your game by this monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 So easy, just banish 8 Fairy when Summoned I see, I didn't notice at first, it seems kind of redundant though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 of all the lore, i would delete only the part that allows you to banish fairy from the deck...that's too dangerous and broke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razzy Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 It does have it's own merit. Venus would love this. Here is a suggestion/idea. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Can only be Special Summoned (from your hand) in face-up Defense Position by tributing 3 face-up Fairy-Type monsters. When this card is Summoned: Banish all Fairy-Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card loses 500 DEF and gains 500 ATK for each of your banished Fairy-Type monsters. After damage calculation, if this card attacked or was attacked, banish 1 Fairy-Type monster from your hand or Graveyard, or destroy this card. If this card has 5000 or more ATK and attacks your opponent directly, destroy this card (after damage calculation). Kind of difference since you'd always be banishing a Fairy, but also stops you from just sitting on a 3-4k+ ATK wall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cocodomoco Posted January 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 Kind of difference since you'd always be banishing a Fairy, but also stops you from just sitting on a 3-4k+ ATK wall. I think for the summoning cost plus no protection from card effects its ok to have that high ATK without too much of a cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razzy Posted January 7, 2014 Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 I agree it's not overpowered and I think it works either way. Just giving ideas ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cocodomoco Posted January 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 I appreciate the ideas :) i was just justifying myself unnecessarily haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cocodomoco Posted January 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2014 I am 8 years old :) AWESOME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted January 8, 2014 Report Share Posted January 8, 2014 I am 8 years old :) That's spam, stop it spambot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cocodomoco Posted January 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2014 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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