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[jabber2033] Ellow, Swordsman of Dark World


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Wait, what?  I'm posting cards again???  Yeah, it's kinda been forever, but this card inspired me to make my own DW support.

 

 

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Lore: 

You can tribute 1 Fiend-Type monster: Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.  If this card was discarded to the Graveyard by a card effect: return one of your banished cards to your Deck, then if this card was discarded to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect, banish 1 card in their Graveyard. 

 

Rate/Fix please.

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The lore is solid just a little off:

 

You can Tribute 1 Fiend-Type monster; Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If this card is discarded to the Graveyard by a card effect: Shuffle 1 of your banished cards into the Deck, then if this card was discarded to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect, banish 1 card from their Graveyard.

 

Something like that. I think you aimed to make the shuffle effect target the card you wish to return but I wasn't sure. In any event, I don't think it's too strong to have it not target. It also doesn't target the card you're going to banish from your opponent's Graveyard which is a little more powerful. Still, it's not overtly bad.

 

I think the first effect is a little weird cause it Tributes for cost. That's not badly designed but in the scope of the archetype, it's outclassed by Grapha. Also, because it doesn't Special Summon itself and doesn't net you any advantage (in terms of card economy), I don't see this being played; certainly not more than Goldd or Silvva--both of whom also have more ATK than it does. Still it's a solid beatstick that can also mean Rank 6 options with Celt and Latinum. Not what Dark World need, but it's another option.

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Something like that. I think you aimed to make the shuffle effect target the card you wish to return but I wasn't sure. In any event, I don't think it's too strong to have it not target. It also doesn't target the card you're going to banish from your opponent's Graveyard which is a little more powerful. Still, it's not overtly bad.

 

I think the first effect is a little weird cause it Tributes for cost. That's not badly designed but in the scope of the archetype, it's outclassed by Grapha. Also, because it doesn't Special Summon itself and doesn't net you any advantage (in terms of card economy), I don't see this being played; certainly not more than Goldd or Silvva--both of whom also have more ATK than it does. Still it's a solid beatstick that can also mean Rank 6 options with Celt and Latinum. Not what Dark World need, but it's another option.

 

Thanks for the OCG fix.  I didn't say "shuffle" because I thought it was implied that you always shuffle your deck if a card is added to it unless the card says otherwise.

 

And I understand what you're saying about not netting advantage; I just thought that if it summoned itself, it would be a bit too busted.  I also went ahead and changed it to level 5, to have synergy with Silva/Goldd.  Not sure if that was the way to go or not.

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