jellal17 Posted January 19, 2014 Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 So i though i would upload my first card I've made since joining i will be making the whole archetype later but though id give a preview of this card and what art work ill be using for the cards :D my text writing isn't that good on yugioh cards just call me the anti grammar king :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 19, 2014 Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 ahh, don't want to be so much since u just introduced urself. but these are the things u should know - Type cannot be made, it must be the original Monsters' Type of Yugioh, or else this would be in Any Other Cards forum, for this I suggested Fiend-Type - u shouldn't use attached image, or else u will find a problem when u uploading multiple cards, just click ur card image at card generator and the img code will appear for copy and paste on this - u should post ur card's lore (its effect) under the card (you can just view other thread and see how they do), that will make other members who want to help u review it or fixing its OCG (Original Card Grammar or what u called text-writing, this one have some mistakes, and I think I can fix it after u posted the lore) - here's its correct lore 2 Level 4 Fiend-Type monsters // lv. must be fully written, T of Type should be capitalized, also monsters didn't need 's When this card is Xyz Summoned: Target 1 card your opponent controls; banish that target OR When this card is Xyz Summoned: Banish 1 card your opponent controls (but this one is too OP, non-target effect is really a powerful effect for Yugioh) // Yugioh's card effect is listed in form off "Timing: Target or Cost/Activation (If no cost); Activation, yea u need colon and semi-colon in almost every cards except the old one that didn't updated its text so from what I adviced, its lore shoud be 2 Level 4 Fiend-Type monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Target 1 card your opponent controls; banish that target. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster on the field; its ATK is halved until the End Phase. some minor mistakes such as a comma b4 during either player's turn or Xyz Monster and Xyz Material capitalized is the thing that u will learn after using this site for a while, well for the first card it's not so broken, just a bit OP, this is Number 94's R4 Fiend-Equivalent, plus a free banished, but its stats are too high (even R5 like No.94 have only 2200 ATK with this kind of powerful effect) with that kind of effect, I suggested u should tone down stat to below 2000, also adding some cost or restriction to banish eff isn't so bad idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jellal17 Posted January 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 OK I'm having problems with this uploading thing when i click the pick all that happens is i got this underneath the picture [img][img] ? it doesn't seem to be opening a new link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 19, 2014 Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 OK I'm having problems with this uploading thing when i click the pick all that happens is i got this underneath the picture [img][img] ? it doesn't seem to be opening a new link oh yea, forgot that's this is temporally broken, so u can just drag the card image to imgur (or any image uploading site i.e. Tinypic, Photobucket, etc.) and upload it there, but if not this time, the code will usually show itself up at that space ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jellal17 Posted January 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 okay done editing :) thanks for help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 19, 2014 Report Share Posted January 19, 2014 Seems nice for Dark Worlds. Gates would send this thing up in strength, really like the idea of the Banish. Seems nice overall. Cool that its a FIRE Fiend, those aren't done that often. And then the half ATK. Thats sweet to be during either turn. Weaker than most Rank 4's in ATK, but it is easily compensated for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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