Newton Vitas Posted January 22, 2014 Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 2 Level 4 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 Set Spell/Trap Card your opponent controls; take control of that target, and if you do, shuffle all Set Spell/Trap Cards you control. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. Not extremely realistic, but new concepts are always welcome, right? I thought it would be fun to take your opponent's backrow. Any criticism is appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted January 22, 2014 Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 Considering this is generic it is insanely overpowered in my honest opinion. Opponent has mirror force set? It's cool take that card then do it again next turn. I can see the efforts to weaken it: Only works on cards (good) but the half damage isn't really prominent. Cards like solemn warning/judgement have shown us that life points are less important than they seem. I'd make it detach 2 materials but that may be taking it a step too far. Perhaps up the limitation so that you can't attack the turn yo use the effect period, that would even it out a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newton Vitas Posted January 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 Considering this is generic it is insanely overpowered in my honest opinion. Opponent has mirror force set? It's cool take that card then do it again next turn. I can see the efforts to weaken it: Only works on cards (good) but the half damage isn't really prominent. Cards like solemn warning/judgement have shown us that life points are less important than they seem. I'd make it detach 2 materials but that may be taking it a step too far. Perhaps up the limitation so that you can't attack the turn yo use the effect period, that would even it out a bit. This card relies a lot on luck, and I think detaching 2 would only emphasize that. Restricting attacks seems fine for me, as it requires some timing and skill as well. I'll stick to this restriction for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted January 22, 2014 Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 This card relies a lot on luck, and I think detaching 2 would only emphasize that. Restricting attacks seems fine for me, as it requires some timing and skill as well. I'll stick to this restriction for now. Seems sensible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 22, 2014 Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 Not to mention they can chain to your effect. Interesting concept, I must say. Weak ATK compensates, etc. I feel shuffling your S/T cards should happen after effect usage; this as is has far too many holes to be useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newton Vitas Posted January 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2014 Not to mention they can chain to your effect. Interesting concept, I must say. Weak ATK compensates, etc. I feel shuffling your S/T cards should happen after effect usage; this as is has far too many holes to be useful. Shuffling your cards is a nice idea. I'll see if I can word it properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newton Vitas Posted January 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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