Huva-snak3 Posted January 23, 2014 Report Share Posted January 23, 2014 Name: Apocalypse Card Type: Fusion Effect Attribute: Dark Level: 12 Card Rarity: Ultimate Rare Circulation: 2 Set ID: 73 - 37 Type: Dragon Description: Five-Headed Dragon + 92 Heart-Earth Dragon Cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per Turn: pay 2000 life points to make the ATK of this card increase 1000 and it's DEF decrease 1000 at the enad of the battle phase card's ATK and DEF return to normal. Cannot be equipped with any spell. Must tribute/discard 1 card every turn, if not then this card is banished. ATK/DEF: 6000/3000 [attachment=40640:cata_011.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netami09 Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 "HP" should be "Life Points". Five-Headed Dragon and Number 92: Heart-eartH Dragon are already hard to summon, so this thing is basically impossible to summon. Trap cards that destroy monsters count as card effects, so the part that says "or trap cards" is unnecessary. Being completely unable to be destroyed by anything is very unrealistic, as is having 16000 ATK if it is summoned while both players have 8000 Life Points. This card is quite the overkill, because Five-Headed Dragon already has 5000 ATK, and the only things that can destroy it in battle are Dragon Master Knight, Slifer the Sky Dragon when the player has 5 cards in their hand, and The Winged Dragon of Ra after its ATK gain effect activates. Even while you control this card, you are still vulnerable to chip damage from The Wicked Avatar, so it's not a guaranteed win, but it basically is if your opponent doesn't have The Wicked Avatar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Gale Dogra 2x +Dragon's Mirror= Profit? Maybe just say "this card cannot be destroyed." But yeah, it seems like a guaranteed win. Don't know what I can really do bout that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huva-snak3 Posted January 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Is this any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netami09 Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 "Sacrifice" should be "Pay", and 6000 ATK is still unrealistic... and what happens when the DEF of the card reaches 0? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slinky Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 "HP" should be "Life Points". Five-Headed Dragon and Number 92: Heart-eartH Dragon are already hard to summon, so this thing is basically impossible to summon. Trap cards that destroy monsters count as card effects, so the part that says "or trap cards" is unnecessary. Being completely unable to be destroyed by anything is very unrealistic, as is having 16000 ATK if it is summoned while both players have 8000 Life Points. This card is quite the overkill, because Five-Headed Dragon already has 5000 ATK, and the only things that can destroy it in battle are Dragon Master Knight, Slifer the Sky Dragon when the player has 5 cards in their hand, and The Winged Dragon of Ra after its ATK gain effect activates. Even while you control this card, you are still vulnerable to chip damage from The Wicked Avatar, so it's not a guaranteed win, but it basically is if your opponent doesn't have The Wicked Avatar. Honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 This feels impossibly hard to use, I'll have to pass giving anymore feedback. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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