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Effect: "Obelisk the Tormentor" + "Slifer the Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon of Ra"

This card cannot be special summoned except with the effect of "The Pharoah's Name - Atem" [you do not use "Polymerization"]. This card cannot be targeted or affected by the effects of monster, spell, or trap cards. When this card attacks an opponent's monster, destroy it with this card's effect without applying damage calculation.

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The presence of the part about not using Poly, the lack of capitalization when specifying types of card effects... It'll be easier if I just fix it:

 

 

"Obelisk the Tormentor" + "Slifer the Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon of Ra"

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Pharaoh's Name - Atem". This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Effect Monsters, Spell and Trap Cards and is unaffected by them. When this card attacks your opponent's monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation.

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Thanks.

 

He didn't mean that as a compliment :?

 

Anyway, this card should have been posted in the Pop Culture section, or the Any Other Cards section, as it is not realistic since the Gods are forbidden in any kind of official play. Also, the pic is kinda blurry, and Crab Helmet pointed out the OCG mistakes.

 

overall - 8.98/13.69 -_-

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It is not a failure! I enjoy coping cards. I put a lot of hard work in simulating that card exactly!

 

I think that's the problem. You're putting so much effort into copying manga or TV show cards, when you should be putting that work into creating your own cards that are original and creative. Most of the people here (including me) don't really like copied cards because, despite how much work you put into them, they don't have much to show for all the work. The pics are already made, the effects are already made, the name and stats are already there. All you do is put those things together onto a card which, frankly, isn't that hard.

 

If you really want people to like your cards you should think of your own names, stats, effects, and find good pics for them that aren't already cards. That way, you'll have done the work and will have something really awesome and neat to show for it. Then people will (hopefully) grade your card well, and you will feel happy about it. I, for one, would love to see what kinds of creative and new things you can come up with.

 

P.S. This post was not made to upset you or make you angry. I simply am trying to explain to you why people are giving you such low scores, and such bad comments. If you wish to continue copying show and manga cards, feel free to do so. Just, leave them in the card maker, or only show them to family and friends who will really appreciate them. Save your best cards for posting here on the forums. That way, people will really say wow when you do post a really awesome and spectacular card. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me and I'd be happy to answer them.

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The presence of the part about not using Poly' date=' the lack of capitalization when specifying types of card effects... It'll be easier if I just fix it:

 

 

"Obelisk the Tormentor" + "Slifer the Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon of Ra"

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Pharaoh's Name - Atem". This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Effect Monsters, Spell and Trap Cards and is unaffected by them. When this card attacks your opponent's monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation.

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Bad OCG fix.

 

Just take the effect text from Venominaga.

 

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Fake card.

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