Philemon Posted January 30, 2014 Report Share Posted January 30, 2014 The last of the Trimurti God's, Brahma. Like Shiva and Vishnu he is a Level 9 Synchro Fairy who needs to be Special Summoned, and his ability is meant to compliment both of theirs, signifying how he is the leader of the 3. The picture I found here, the only difference is cropped out the white edges. [spoiler='Brahma the Creator']1 LIGHT Tuner + 2 or more non-LIGHT non-Tuner monsters Must first be Synchro Summoned. The Synchro Summon of this Monster cannot be negated. During the End Phase, if you destroyed a card, you can add that 1 card to your hand; If you did not destroy any cards, you can add one card from your Graveyard to your hand. This card must be face-up to activate and resolve this effect.[/spoiler] Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philemon Posted January 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2014 Bump, anyone have anything to say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted January 31, 2014 Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 It feels powerful yet balanced and simple very very powerful though the destruction ability throws the flavor off a bit.. 8.5/10 P.S comment on my card here XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philemon Posted February 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 One last bump for criticism, comments, advice, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirur Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 The card's text doesnt make sense in one part: "During the End Phase, if you destroyed a card, you can that 1 card to your hand" - You can that card? What does that even mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philemon Posted February 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 The card's text doesnt make sense in one part: "During the End Phase, if you destroyed a card, you can that 1 card to your hand" - You can that card? What does that even mean? I forgot the word "add" in the sentence. I couldn't quite figure out how to word that part: Basically if you destroyed 1 or more cards with Brahma, you can add 1 of those cards to your hand. Any idea what the OCG would be for that? If not I'll scrap I think I'll just it entirely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirur Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 I forgot the word "add" in the sentence. I couldn't quite figure out how to word that part: Basically if you destroyed 1 or more cards with Brahma, you can add 1 of those cards to your hand. Any idea what the OCG would be for that? If not I'll scrap I think I'll just it entirely. I don't entirely understand how can you destroy 1 or more cards with him? Were talking about destroying in combat right? I really am confused about his whole effect.... I hope you explain please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 I don't entirely understand how can you destroy 1 or more cards with him? Were talking about destroying in combat right? I really am confused about his whole effect.... I hope you explain please!http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Shark_Fortress Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philemon Posted February 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 I don't entirely understand how can you destroy 1 or more cards with him? Were talking about destroying in combat right? I really am confused about his whole effect.... I hope you explain please! It's not just with him, it's with any card. Let's say I use Heavy Storm and then destroy 2 monsters by battle, I can add a Spell/Traps card destroyed by Heavy Storm to my hand, or I can add 1 of the 2 Monster's destroyed by battle to my hand. Sorry if it was too ambiguous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 It's not just with him, it's with any card. Let's say I use Heavy Storm and then destroy 2 monsters by battle, I can add a Spell/Traps card destroyed by Heavy Storm to my hand, or I can add 1 of the 2 Monster's destroyed by battle to my hand. Sorry if it was too ambiguous.If that so, then it's pretty OP, pls make only monster can be added, or else grab BTH, Warning, Lance, etc from your opponent's Graveyard is too abuseable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philemon Posted February 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 If that so, then it's pretty OP, pls make only monster can be added, or else grab BTH, Warning, Lance is too abuseable I was thinking that, but Brahma lacks any destruction or protection effects like Shiva or Vishnu, and he'd need back up alongside the cost bringing him out. Plus I wanted to keep the thematic elements, so it was either this or a Deck searching ability. And being the greatest of the 3 Gods, I think he should have the greatest effect of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirur Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 It's not just with him, it's with any card. Let's say I use Heavy Storm and then destroy 2 monsters by battle, I can add a Spell/Traps card destroyed by Heavy Storm to my hand, or I can add 1 of the 2 Monster's destroyed by battle to my hand. Sorry if it was too ambiguous. Oh okay I get it now... DAaaaaaaaaaaamn thats way too powerfull! Hahaha I feel like he should have some sort of limit or drawback or this effect will just be abused! Also you should consider fixing his text so he actualy makes sense because the way it is right now is horrible... Maybe balance him out somehow? Like if you use his effect you must discard a card.. or something like that.. or not.. you decide haha! I do like the original idea! Don't really like image it doesn't really fit how much of a boss he is, also his effect is The Creator? It's more like The Stealer! LOL. Overall it's an awesome Boss Monster but still needs balancing! - 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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