Shadowmoon666 Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 I would like your thoughts on these cards I thought up [attachment=40684:NightShade.jpg] [attachment=40679:field card.jpg] [attachment=40680:trap.jpg] [attachment=40678:Spell.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowmoon666 Posted February 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 I have two more but I cant upload them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greatguy123 Posted February 1, 2014 Report Share Posted February 1, 2014 Cool! They look really good (especially the pictures), but they're really overpowered; you should probably tone them down a little bit. For example, maybe for Dark Reality you could make it 500 attack instead of 2000. Otherwise I think they're really good! Also, if you want to post a lot of cards, all you have to do is go to the card maker, open the card you want to share, and then click on it. It should bring up a code beneath the card. Then, just copy and paste that code into your post where you want the card. That way you can put as many cards in a post as you want! One more thing: some of the cards have incorrect grammar or terms. For instance, on your Nightshade card, you should use the term "tribute", not "sacrifice". Also, on Final Toll, it should be "every monster card in their graveyard", instead of "in there graveyard" Hope this helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
death00 Posted February 3, 2014 Report Share Posted February 3, 2014 NightShade: First, if you're going to give a monster a 2 word name, space it out like this- "Night Shade". Second, Reaper is not a real type. It should either be Warrior or Fiend. Third, his effect should be- "While this card is on the field, every time a monster is destroyed and sent to the grave, you gain 1000 Life Points. If 3 other monsters you control are destroyed, this card gains this effect: Tribute this card to Tribute Summon "Shinigami Night Shade"." (who?? if you're going to post a monster whose effect states that it requires the tribute of another monster, who does not exist in the yugioh world, you must also post the monster required for to tribute summon (this also applies for monsters whose effects allow you to tribute them to tribute summon another monster who does not exist in the world of yugioh)) (back to the effect) "If you still control 3 other monsters who were summoned on the same turn as this card, 3 turns after this card was summoned, it gains this effect: Tribute this card to Tribute Summon "Mars Night Shade"." Dark Reality should read: "All Dark Attribute," (dark isn't a type) "Zombie Type, Warrior Type, and Fiend Type monsters" (Destroyer and Death are not types) "gain 2000 ATK." (lower that) Final Toll: "Every time a monster is Banished, both players take 500 points of damage." Blood Reconstruction: First, it should be a continuous spell, right now there's just a space. Second, it should read- "Once per turn: Pay 1000 Life Points and discard a card, if you do, you may Special Summon one monster from your grave." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greatguy123 Posted February 3, 2014 Report Share Posted February 3, 2014 He can make his cards how he wants. I've had people critique my cards like that before, and it's really irritating. I'm sure he's fully aware that "Reaper", "Death", and "Destroyer" are not real types. They wouldn't let you use fake types if they didn't want you to use them. I don't, but if he wants to, I think he should be able to. Also, the space in Blood Reconstruction isn't on purpose; sometimes when you open a card it doesn't fully generate it. He probably just didn't notice it before he shared it (I've done the same thing). Most cards I've seen actually just use "DARK", not "dark attribute". I'm glad you're willing to help; I just know it can irritating when someone heavily critiques you're cards. I think it can discourage them from sharing more of their cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
death00 Posted February 3, 2014 Report Share Posted February 3, 2014 Shadowmoon 666 should be able to defend himself, and also if he can't take criticism, he shouldn't be posting on this site because criting cards is what other users are supposed to do, so if you please Great guy 123, mind your own business Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowmoon666 Posted February 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2014 thanks a lot for the advice and I asked for the criticism so as I appreciate you protecting me but I did ask for it, the types were on purpose and the other two would not fit but thanks to you guy I know how to make it work it is a continues sell card it didn't load and death00 thanks for the set up I well defiantly try to incorporate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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